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The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly
I turned my assassin into my maid with the power of money! Money is all-powerful!
It was a world full of swords and magic; Lawrend was the son of the wealthiest merchant in town. Since the age of 7, he had been having dreams. A dream about a past life in a modern civilization where monsters are nonexistent, and humans dominate the world. Lawrend saw Iron birds, Magical bricks that display moving paintings, Thunder wielding, and many more.
There was a scene in one of the dreams that made Lawrend’s heart beat fast. A row of a dozen maids bowing in front of him. Each dressed in a french maid outfit.
Something awakened inside Lawrend when he had that dream. A fervent desire to have his very own Maid Harem!
NOTE: READ THE AUXILIARY CHAPTER FIRST
Chapter 69 is the first smut chapter.
UPDATE December 2, 2021:
I have provided a summary for Chapters 1 - 37 as I'm starting to rewrite them. It can be found in the Auxiliary Volume. Please give this novel another chance. I want to redeem myself as an author.
UPDATE January 19, 2022:
I already wrote the sequel for this novel called, "Lewd Cultivation System". The connection will be mentioned in the future, but for now, the connection isn't obvious. It can be read without prior knowledge about Combat Maid Harem.
UPDATE February 11, 2022:
For reasons I do not know, this book got nominated for WSA 2021, which is a huge success for this book. Basically, it means that this book is good enough but not good enough to get the gold, silver, or bronze places.
UPDATE October 3, 2023:
I've decided to pause this novel. I will end it when I have the time. For now, I'll go resume "Lewd Cultivation System"
UPDATE January 1, 2025:
This novel is now going to end soon in about 20-30 chapters. After this, I will also do the same to "Lewd Cultivation System".
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Chapter Length: 1000 words
ADDITIONAL NOTE: PLEASE READ TILL CHAPTER 40+ BEFORE DECIDING ON ANYTHING. I'M SURE YOU WON'T REGRET IT
877 Chs28.9k Koleksi
Book Ending Soon This Month
A satisfying ending will be made. You have my guarantee
Do you want pleasure?
The world only has so much of it. That’s why Misho Merkia entered the world of Aphrodos. It was a VRMMORPG game that featured cultivation as its core.
What was so special about this game, you asked? Well, long story short, Players level up by experiencing sexual pleasure. Women would be writhing in mind-numbing pleasure in the game while their real bodies would stay perfectly pure.
Nothing was so perfect, right? That was what Misho Merkia did not know.
The hidden predator watched its prey under the waters as it lured them to the game. Read more to find out what happens next.
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Author’s Note:
The start is a slow burn as I can’t put anything sexual in the first 10 chapters. Don’t worry, I promise that it will be entertaining to read.
RESUMED SERIALIZATION!
I totally forgot I had a schedule to resume this novel. Thanks for those who came back.
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Limited Weekly PS Goal:
100 PS = +1 Bonus Chapter
Rant Valo was an outcast in his village. His dream was to marry the village maiden, Zaria, and live a normal life.
His life took a turn for the worst when the whole village decided to kick him out. Left alone with no place to go, he can only travel to the nearest town.
On his way to the town he fainted because of dehydration. That was when his life started to change.
Filled with violence and fiery temper. A small little girl who claims to be a Mana Dominion expert which is someone who stands at the peak of cultivation in the world saved his life.
The little girl named Floriana Sabina forced him to be her disciple before taking him on an adventure around the world. They cooked fishes, explored ancient ruins, learned cultivation, and lastly, got a daily dose of tsundere.
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"Just kowtow already! You idiot!"
Floriana Sabina grabbed Rant Valo's hair and dragged it towards the ground.
Ow! Ow! Ow!
After hitting Rant Valo's head on the ground three times, she stopped.
"Now call me, Master!"
"No! I don't wanna!"
Rant Valo struggled to free from her grip on his hair. But to no avail could he escape.
"Mas! Ter! Call me Master!"
Where was the peaceful life that he was promised?
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Authors Note:
This is my take on Spirity 2021
Since this novel is a slice of life novel. It will be VERY VERY slow paced. So don't expect anything major happening anytime soon.
The release rate will be improved over time. From 7/week to 8/week till we get 14/week or 2 chaps per day.
NEW STATUS: COMPLETED
So I can achieve a daily upload, the chapters will only be 1,000 words long.
The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly
Heir of Creation
Fantasy · Sleepy_Slime