dongchang of the United States. .seriously man. . .. how come everything turns to Chinese, means we are talking about the USA and now it has become Chinese part suddenly.
And in this life, he had become an Inspector of the 'Dongchang of the United States,' the Tax Bureau, with power and authority. Wouldn't that be even better?
American Tax Officer
Urban · Xixiangtang Bottle Blowing King
S.H.I.E.L.D. - Strategic Homeland Intervention, Enforcement and Logistics Division.
S.H.I.E.L.D, the full name of which is the Strategic Homeland Defense Attack and Logistics Support Agency, is an organization that prevents major crises.
Marvel: Striking a Deal with Tom Cat from Day One
Movies · sabina_ali
super serious criminals?????// really......[img=update]
S.H.I.E.L.D's exclusive prison, where all the prisoners are super serious criminals.
Marvel: Striking a Deal with Tom Cat from Day One
Movies · sabina_ali
The story is good, but when will you write it further. all the other ones are also halted in the middle as well.
the story is good and the idea about the revolution from the scratch by feeling the same difficulties as the masses felt them is very good and the story development is pretty good, as it has the different pov and thoughts to support the idea reflected in the story. Good fanfic to read.
good story development and writing is good as there are no language mistakes.
so far the writing is good and world background was kept in mystery as complete details were not shown, but the structure around it was well built and layered by later the details are showing. MC walks on the path of OPness from ground and has a good mentality so far.
very good start, like his straight forward personality, don't make him bend the knee by being soft on Konoha hypocrite.
the quality is good and story development progresses so far shows the potential it have.
get well soon. .
Marvel: My Sign-in System
Movies · GreekGreenGlass