lbaro97

lbaro97

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2019-04-26 Bergabung United Kingdom
Lencana 10

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lbaro97
lbaro97
24 days ago
Commented

Loved it! And now I am lopking forward to the reactions and what comes next. 😃

lbaro97
lbaro97
1 months ago
Commented

Great chapter as always. Though I do have a question. Do you plan on going through every single episode of the curator? If we are now only at the end of the second episode, then I think it might be getting a little too long.

lbaro97
lbaro97
2 months ago
Commented

If this is a new novel, please post it as a separate story, not like this. Also, I would very much like to coninue reading the first story.

lbaro97
lbaro97
3 months ago
Commented

I am thinking just how bothersome it has to be to say the name of that metal several times in a conversation... 😅

"That makes sense. I hope I don't have to wait that long to get my hands on EE-343F-00334R, though."

The Mech Touch

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Commented

You should calculate that again...

In terms of strength, there had also been a surge. Before, a single root could exert a force of 1000 kilograms, but now it had soared to 4000 kilograms, which is 2 tons of force.

Global Catastrophe: I Became the World Tree

Global Catastrophe: I Became the World Tree

Sci-fi · Crystal head

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Replied to Azrail93

Allright. So if he wins the 3-star challenge, will he get an s-rank Badge?

I obviously researched her team(s) since I was planning to go for a 3-star Badge, and I was shocked when I saw the lineup of her main/strongest team. Apparently, Stephanie Stone was as talented a trainer as her brother, or rather her brother was as talented as his sister. Either way, she was someone who was close to attaining the title of a Master. Stephanie's main team was entirely at the platinum stage, and she was only one Pokemon short of reaching the 4 mid and 1 high stage 6 Pokemon requirement set for Master-Class Trainers.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Commented

Just to make sure I am getting this right: Mikail can collect S-rank badges while challenging on a 3 star level? 3 Star meaning he can only use up to silver stage Pokemon? And a 4 star challenge for an s-rank badge would include gold stage pokemon?

I obviously researched her team(s) since I was planning to go for a 3-star Badge, and I was shocked when I saw the lineup of her main/strongest team. Apparently, Stephanie Stone was as talented a trainer as her brother, or rather her brother was as talented as his sister. Either way, she was someone who was close to attaining the title of a Master. Stephanie's main team was entirely at the platinum stage, and she was only one Pokemon short of reaching the 4 mid and 1 high stage 6 Pokemon requirement set for Master-Class Trainers.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Commented

That was a good section. The increased amount of interaction between the shelder and Mikail immediately made it more interesting to read.

As usual, it would also improve his potential, ensuring that he could keep growing stronger if he wanted to. I did not plan to prevent any of the guardians from training themselves to get stronger. They were free to do so while they did their job to guard the reserve, and I would even leave them some decent resources/supplements if that was what they wanted. Still, this was obviously only under the stipulation that they could not neglect their actual job. Due to our agreement, acting as security guards had priority over their training after all.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Commented

This is another example of a scene that could have been fleshed out some more. Even if it was relatively easy to subdue them, you could have taken the chance to showcase Hades prowess. Since all battle scenes are always summarized, I honestly don't know how much power a gold or dark gold stage Pokemon has. What exactly are they able to do? How much destruction? How large is the area they can affect with their attacks. You need to add some details, some comparisons, something to visualize it so we, the readers, can imagine it.

On Giratiday of said week, we finally saw some action which we were allowed to interfere with since the two fighters were causing too much damage to the environment. Still, they were not all that strong, just at the (high) gold stage, so Hades alone was enough to pacify the two and separate them.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

lbaro97
lbaro97
5 months ago
Commented

When you wrote the battles Mikail was fighting himself (not Pokemon battles) you showed that you can write good battles. Why do you insist on glossing over every single Pokemon battle that has happened so far? I cannot remember a single fleshed out pokemon battle in this whole story... 😕

Weiss had her first battle 3 hours after the opening ceremony, and she used her Bounsweet, who by now had reached the (mid) bronze stage, to beat her opponent's (low) bronze stage Murkrow. She joined us after that since she had no further battles that day, and while we watched some of the battles that were taking place, we mostly strolled around the city for the rest of the day.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93