The fanfic seems good overall but I really should rewrite the ROB part, it's completely unnecessary.
The story has an interesting idea but the format of how the characters speak is completely horrible
I just hope that Los Angeles and the sky aren't the villains at some point because that's already a well-worn cliché.
It seems interesting but he decided to please the virgin incels and became a harem google translate
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and in the last chapter you can't tell the characters apart
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It's really hard to maintain a clean conscience when you're surrounded and encouraged by genocidal aliens that wanted to only eat and fight. Especially when your entire race has been enslaved by Frieza, an especially genocidal alien that commits war crimes to pass time. No one could say I didn't give it my best shot, though.this is not mine the creator is (Ideas-guy) in fanfiction I will delete it if the creator wants it11 Chs 36 Koleksi
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It's true I tried to read a little but the whole text felt robotic.
The Knight’s Oath: Grey’s Anatomy
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