depression? more like whining
He paused, his voice dropping to a whisper. "It wasn't my enemies who broke me, Max. It was the people I loved. My family, Avey… the ones I would have died for. They were the ones who shattered me."
Urban · LazyDiablo
last chaps I still sympathises with you right now after reading your "sacrifice" it's cringe me enough to vomit you sound like some emo teen kid who can't accept what reality is. True love is not like this shits this is not sacrifice this is some stupidity of you to justify your so called "love" dieing for her means nothing more like a punishment for her a guilt prison it doesn't prove you love her it proves you are obsessed of her you don't even thinking of her you are thinking of satisfying your so called love
Lucian closed his eyes, his hands clenching into fists at his sides. "Max, I'm tired. I'm tired of fighting. Tired of hoping, tired of waiting. My heart… it's broken, Max. It's been broken so many times I can't even count. I've tried to hold on, tried to repair it, but it's gone. There's nothing left."
Urban · LazyDiablo
nah we don't have that kind of law here as long as you are under 18 laws can't touch you
After agreeing to wait until they were at least physically older than 18 years, they resumed their daily routine.
Anime & Comics · FirstHokage
a hole is a hole you noobshitss
Before she knew it, she jumped towards him and embraced him tightly.
Fantasy · Crypthh
I thought mc has bigger reason "sacrifice" is word for a reason not like this, this is forceful creepy love more like obsession and it harm both ways I now know why you are in that situation, YOU put yourself in that situation and still thinking it doing for LOVE that's not love thats fckng creepy it's not sacrifice it's guilt tripping a fckng gaslighting
It was the ultimate, final act of love. A self-sacrifice, a gesture so grand it couldn't be ignored. He didn't expect her to understand it. He didn't even expect her to care. But in his mind, this was the only way he could finally prove it. That his love for her was real. That it had always been real. Even if she had never felt the same, even if she had rejected him only god knows how many times , he could still give her something no one else could.
Urban · LazyDiablo
that a dangerous sentence author san, not picking on your work. I actually intrigued and like it but this sentence give us a foreshadow of character bound in the fate or plot it makes the mc effort seem useless and upset a lot of reader
There was a brief pause, and then Max answered in that steady, neutral voice. [It's a perfect score, Host. One hundred percent. If it weren't for the people you were bound to the characters of the novel or the plot they would've definitely loved you back. Your love was boundless. Even I, as your system, am honored to have chosen someone like you as my Host.]
Urban · LazyDiablo
mc
The man's eyes glistened, though no tears fell. "If someone were to ask me what the most painful torture in the world is, I'd tell them to make someone fall in love. And then… don't love them back. Believe me, Max, they'll remember that pain until the day they die."
Urban · LazyDiablo
'No, nothing is impossible.'
Anime & Comics · akikan40
So?
Before she knew it, she jumped towards him and embraced him tightly.
Fantasy · Crypthh
I know Love is different from everyone but this is not what love is for me and for a lot of people, well from your word author san mc "LOVE" is a toxic or obsession I'm just irritated he call it "sacrifice" justifying his way of "LOVE", to make it clear I don't hate your work it's actually intrigued me to read it, it's your novel do your thing dont mind me I'm just ranting here.
Lucian closed his eyes, his hands clenching into fists at his sides. "Max, I'm tired. I'm tired of fighting. Tired of hoping, tired of waiting. My heart… it's broken, Max. It's been broken so many times I can't even count. I've tried to hold on, tried to repair it, but it's gone. There's nothing left."
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo