Mandas1 - Profile

I like your story, and the way you flesh out the world and the characters. Please continue writing it, any way you want, and ignore those that hate having the story deviate from the original one. If they want to see that one, they can play the game again :)

Your story is awesome, with every chapter bringing something interesting, fun, fleshing the characters or building the world. Please continue writing it :)

Very good writing, nice jokes, good plot, likeable character. Please continue writing this ---------------------------------------------------------------- :)

First review Not bad. The grammar can be worked on more, and some parts of the story are a bit exaggerated, but the premise is good and I will continue reading it, as I like what you've done until now.

Nice story. Worth a read. The way that the MC plans these merciless things, and the way the other characters are portrayed is awesome. :)[img=recommend]

All I can say is that, this story is awesome. The way you portray your character, their actions, the reactions from the other characters, how they think, feel is amazing, and I wish more stories were like yours. Please continue creating such an amazing peace of literature. :)