amazing as always
This is really good... keep it up!
Lot's of minor mistakes with grammar here and there... Always make a full lookover on the content of the chap and eliminate the mistakes... that taken care of, this will be a 10/10 fic
The pace feels good, if you accelerate a lil bit more it's going to ruin the good vibe that is right now... So please, acommodate youreself with this pace and fill in with more details and a bit more of slice of life (for the sake of us getting to know better the other characters!) Anyway, great fic! Just needs some revisions cuz there's been some grammar mistakes here and there.
Niceeeee, always a pleasure to see a new TES Fic/Novel! Keep it up bro!
No need for an MC that doesn't fit in the plot of ASOIAF by being an ultra powerful warrior/mage dragonborn who would stomp over any and all... Better be it realistic and fitting for how dramatic, cold and "real" (even with magic and dragons) Asoiaf can be... In addiction, I find you fic to be extra good, the flow , the uality and the overall plot is amazing! Don't change the way it is, because honestly, it is fitting rather well in the mega plot of Asoiaf itself... The mc not being an ultra powerhouse makes that even better... (Even though, compared to the norm, he still is a powerhouse).
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"We've also have conflicting reports stating that there have been at least two engagements between elements of the Guard and the Blood Ravens, who own the cruiser."
A Tale of Blood and Steel (WH 40K SI)
Video Games · OtakuWeibo
I know mostly nothing of the WH40K universe, but hey, who cares??? awesome fic bro
I'm about to cry dude :(
"DAMN IT AFTON! LISTEN TO ME! I'M DEAD ANYWAY, JUST GET OUT OF HERE! I WON'T LET MY FAMILY BE WIPED OUT BY THESE FUCKERS... NOW!" he roars, the Gatling Laser expelling the hot empty Electron charge pack as he shoves another inside.
Steel Waste
Video Games · Niggross
thx
Skyrim: A Dragon's Humanity
Video Games · Zak_the_noble