Immortuos

Immortuos

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Immortuos
Immortuos
1 hours ago
Replied to Immortuos

Lol, now I wonder if this sentence sounds like I’m commanding u to get better soon so you can write again, to make sure I will clarify that I meant it with a care for your health and not simply your linguistic capabilities

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I appreciate your understanding during this time and will resume as soon as I'm feeling better.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 hours ago
Commented

Get better soon!

I appreciate your understanding during this time and will resume as soon as I'm feeling better.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 hours ago
Replied to NewGame_3655

Lol, understandable

Immortuos
Immortuos
10 hours ago
Replied to NewGame_3655

Except this is fate cath palug

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 days ago
Replied to P_J_Sch

Being reincarnated isn’t all that realistic as well

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 days ago
Commented

All those systems feel pretty boring I mean the class system is cool but the other two are too much in my opinion but maybe you can execute it welll and it will be great and the only other thing that bothers me (not that much) is that this says reincarnated as slaneesh and the mc only has their looks kinda hairy but I understand, slaneesh would be pretty op immediatly and hard to write

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 days ago
Replied to Jibberflex

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"It's true..." He interjected again, his tone softer now. "This was not her doing,— her father, Otto set her upon this path, not her own will. You shouldn't fault your friend so much." Rhaenyra hesitated, her violet eyes searching Alicent's face for any sign of deceit. "Is this true?"

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official

Immortuos
Immortuos
1 days ago
Commented

Mah, this is webnovel most people complain after a 100 words and lack foresight to think about the future consequences of characters actions so you shouldn’t take the comments who shit on you seriously,

I genuinely believed I was on the right track, but it seems I may have misjudged some aspects. Thank you to those who shared their thoughts,— both positive and negative... Feedback is invaluable, and I'll be reflecting on it as I move forward.

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

House Of The Dragon: 'The Exiled Prince'

Book&Literature · Targaryen_Official

Immortuos
Immortuos
11 days ago
Commented

Man this is a lot of ass pulling I have been seeing and it’s not even chapter 10, the custom item system and finding one of the twenty only guarded by a what lvl 70 dragon?

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Immortuos
Immortuos
16 days ago
Commented

Hmm, I would prefer you focus on Greek mythology at least initially, but you do what you would prefer, you’re the writer

I was thinking about including characters from other mythologies and series, maybe even doing an arc where Asterius goes to other mythologies/dimensions! What do you think? In fact, if you accept, I already have an idea of ​​some characters! Tell me what you think, please.

Reborn as the Minotaur God

Reborn as the Minotaur God

Anime & Comics · Mujun_Sama

  • The Draconic Rebirth original

    The Draconic Rebirth

    Fantasy REINCARNATION SYSTEM EVOLUTION DRAGON

    This is my first story so it might not be good. I would like it if u give me suggestions about which direction u would like the story to go and please do tell if i make mistakes in grammar please comment about it normally, calmly without being salty and when i say that u comment about it don't just say its shit but explain why its shit. And i will write this when i have free time and when i have ideas about the story so comment and give me ideas that i can implement in my story Not my picture, i took it from the internet. --------------------------------------- The mc is ran over by truck after complaining how there is no good novels about the mc being a dragon and now he has a chance to make his own draconic story with this one in a lifetime rebirth.

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