so far the story is good and it has my attention. I can not wait for more of this story and how it progresses. Please continue to write this author.
I like the story the author has made so far it is a good chance of pace to where the main character is supposed to be all-dominating and women are supposed to fall in his lap like he is owed them. the dynamics with Abigail and mc are actually done really well as a couple. I honestly see there being a couple like that in real life because not all men wear the pants in the relationships. the main character was a dead man literally and figuratively while Abby the symbiote is wanting more than just to be called a weapon. the writing quality is wonderful and fluid, updates are ongoing and doing good, story development is a 5stars in my book, character designs are actually progressing nicely and wonderful to rea, as for the background I think since people who read or watch the marvel universe have certain expectations it can become lower in their eyes I'm no exceptions but the author is doing a wonderful job in all aspects when it comes to the story as a whole. so keep up the good work author and don't mind the people who are hating.
thanks for the chapters can't wait for more because I like where this is going.
I think the way you are writing the story is good. now that I know that Markus trip with the straw hats are coming to an end I'm getting excited because I want to see what you will do with the MC in the later chapters. author keep up the good work and do what you want with Your story.
by the time he becomes a god that lying skill should be maxed out and evolved into a better skill.
Lying(Passive) Lvl. 30/50 (+1)]
Anime & Comics · fallingstar
the story is good but painfully slow pace I know you wanted take slow a bit but. sure we know about the characters you have now. But the other characters I would not enough. it almost feels like the gangsters are fleshed out more then the ones you want for the future. This is just my opinion but hey.
Rise of the Immortal Black Dragon King
Anime & Comics · Sol_Pendragon