I like the start not overly detailed. No problem reading. It looks promising I hope to see me chapters.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค
legen wait for it dary
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In Black Clover With Anti Magic System
Anime & Comics ยท HSR_writes
Cliffhangers make me violent๐๐ก๐ฅ
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Reincarnated into twilight unknowingly.
Movies ยท Uchiha_Lover21
+1
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Twilight reborn as a Dhamphir.
Movies ยท Uchiha_Lover21
Gone in 60seconds?
"Ok what car to take to school for my first day?" As I finish that sentence I spot the only car I've every wanted, even in my past life. A beautiful grey 67' Shelby GT 500, that's right. "Hello Elenore, you're looking awfully sexy today." As I slowly walk and slide my hand across the side from the bumper to the door handle and hop in. Turning the key in the ignition, the roaring engine makes me feel at home behind this wheel. I notice there are racing gauges on the dash as well. "Oh yea I need to see how fast you can go baby." 'But not now, just need to get to school.'
My Own Lucifer In The Multiverse
Movies ยท mrblood388
I'm ready for more chapters keep up the good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please don't drop this I really love this book. I hope to see more pages in the future. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐ค๐ฅ
I like they way the story is going so far but the main thing is the grammar needs a lot of work.The second isn't as serious is the character design. I feel you could give him a little more depth but I think you could leave him as is and it would still be a good story.๐๐๐ป
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TO BE FORGOTTEN
Anime & Comics ยท Paradox_
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Yes
Reborn In Chicago Fire
TV ยท HiTherefic