All the timelines in this novel are "wonky" and the protagonist is WAaayyyy too young for these sexual connotations. It would be better if there was 2 years buffer for the plagiarism and the protagonist was at least 16 years old (preferably 18, but in many places the age of legal consent is 16).
Please stop calling him by his whole name all the time. "Shuichi Chiba" just use "Shuichi" or "Chiba". It will be a lot more enjoyable to read.
Shuichi Chiba and Hachiya Uchida exchanged glances and then shook their heads in unison. "No, we don't."
Starting Tokyo Life From Inheriting A Shopping Street
Anime & Comics · GreenBlue17
How it's going? Well i hope [img=recommend]
I'm taking a break for a few days (or week or so) now. I'm currently looking for a new apartment because I'm now starting a temporary job as a parcel delivery person for DHL. Had to quit my previous job as a programmer (burnout).
MARVEL loner wants peace for his hobby’s
Anime & Comics · Tritonos
Dive in the water. The missiles are useless in water. Explosions do not "travel" well in water either.
"Venom we don't have much of a choice, protect me from shrapnel" David said as his eyes glowed with red shooting out a long line of laser cutting through a section of the missiles aiming at him, but they were to close to him so he still couldn't escape.
Marvel: Superman
Anime & Comics · Karate_master_b
*is
On the other hand, his freeze breath could reach -600°.
Marvel: Superman
Anime & Comics · Karate_master_b
Absolute zero = 0 K = -273.15 °C = -460 °F There in nothing beyond that.
On the other hand, his freeze breath could reach -600°.
Marvel: Superman
Anime & Comics · Karate_master_b
The premise is good but the AI bot writin is bad.
The story starts good but it will slip gradually more and more in to the Chinise worldview until the story becomes unreadable.
It's starting to feel like too much drama/f**kup's from mc. This Saren situation seems a little like a forced plot point. Otherwise i have liked this novel!
This isn't how IQ tests work. The IQ tests doesn't test anything related to EQ.
Martin considered it but ultimately shook his head. He wasn't sure how his mind, as a succubus, would score on a human IQ test—it might label him as either a simpleton or a lunatic.
Entertainment: Starting as a Succubus, Taking Hollywood by Storm
Celebrities · GodOfReader