KUSHISU

Its good but mc paths is too thorny and disapointing . Its sad because mc's ways of doing things is like sacrificing his close ones for strangers.naive thinking of being a hero . I though his persona in a latter chal will be a nonchalant voldigoad. I just think it because he choose its power .his friend and love ones is already tired of figthing but he keep pushing things out. That he makes me think that he is just copying the og kevin.way of doing thinks . Sometimes he knew whats gonna happend but did nothing to prevent it . And the higher ups is already annoying why not be the higher ups ? Kevin in yur story is making of many What if . What if .what if . Dont wory bro ur good at making novels its just not compatible with me ,because i already read too many novels .so sorry if i think that yur mc is too saint,holy mother ,naive and too righteous

Author. I now understand why ther is a few reader in this novel. 1 character development. Is mehhhhhh 2. Easy to be flustered mc 3 over thinking mc 4. Brain stop when encountering an heroine 5.holy virgin mc 6. Two personality cnby 7 Sentimental mc By the way . This is only for up to chapter 51 I only wish for calm mc. Im sorry but mc is keeping my nerves off .so i will not continue this . 🤡💢💢💢 But i think its good for new reader . Sorry author if im mean and rude . It just i already read too much novel and that your work in my eyes is barely average. But i will give you five start.

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Good but im not clear about jalter and poseidon relationship ........................................................................................

im in chap 43 your writing to much about mc's father and his father character is developing to harem emo protagonist are yu sure that mc's father is not the real mc?