Hmm, Story gave me an entertaining read. For starters, it gives the vibe where the main character has a crush on this particular girl but is afraid to tell her that, but instead, he tells her that he supports her and hopes that she would receive all kinds of success. Furthermore, this story is really a promising story.
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I have few things I want to say 1) I like the way the author writes different perspective of Different characters. It feels unique to read. 2) The scene's and Dialogue were smooth, having a constant flow makes me as a reader want to continue with the next chapter 3) The setting and concept of this novel are Somewhat above average but not perfect. It gives you the vibe where magic is something that is a common usage but not at the same time. 4) There are some flaws, but I believe the characters are nicely done. I hope to see more amusing chapters from this author, I have hopes that he would make it to the top
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Actually.. ill just edit it and leave Finn dead. Thanks for pointing it out
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I shall apologize for that, I will start making edits to fill it up. I made a mistake killing him. he is actually one of the main characters who will help to continue this story.
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The story has an interest aspect of the writers, its almost as is you could feel that the authors is in the story. Its well paced and there might be some things that need to be worked on by, the author will improve with time. I am looking forward to more chapters.
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original Cubicle to Cube World
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*This is a Minecraft Fanfiction* *Synopsis Is WIP* *Read It, I hope it doesn't disappoint you*4 Chs 12 Koleksi
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Arcane Gladiator
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In a futuristic world encased in magical domes to fend off mutant monstrosities, the gladiatorial arena is both entertainment and battlefield, where magical warriors vie for glory. Rafael, a bumbling janitor ridiculed for his seemingly useless powers, is unexpectedly thrust into the arena. When his dormant reality-warping magic awakens, Rafael’s life takes a turn as chaotic as his newfound abilities. As Rafael rises through the ranks, his unconventional combat style and comedic missteps captivate the audience. However, behind the arena’s glamour lurks a sinister system controlled by the High Magi, an elite group manipulating gladiators and society. Rafael discovers the dark origins of his power and becomes the reluctant spark for rebellion against the corrupt system. With a colorful ensemble of allies, including ex-gladiators, rebels, and outcasts, Rafael battles for justice, transforming from an unlikely hero into a symbol of hope, armed with nothing but chaotic magic and sheer determination.4 Chs 4 Koleksi
The story is literally too weird for me, i honestly could not get pass Chapter 1, and just skip straight to Chapter 2 thinking that it could be just as weird as Chapter 1.. Strangely enough, I find this Story abit fascinating for its own concept. However, i could not see myself reading this, reason being 7s...... Will be back in the future to give this another go after a few more updates from author.
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