I'm a programmer, indie game developer, and a self-published writer.
2018-12-13 Bergabung Global
thanks a lot!
ch 0 4 The Naked Green Lady
Action · Katekichi
oi oi oi! Thanks! This means a lot
Yes, I'm planning on switching the double dashes with the em dash
ch 0 6 Pako and Rin
Action · Katekichi
Oi Oi Oi... Thank you UwU
ch 0 1 Prologue: The Distress Call
Action · Katekichi
No one talks like this... It's clear you are trying to describe how our protagonist looks... You should try finding some other way of doing it. This like is breaking the story.
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Fantasy · KikiCreative
*blender goes bŕrrrr*
"Didn't I tell you... I hate waiting," the man said and closed his hand into a fist.
Action · Katekichi
Thanks a lot! I'll look into the punctuation errors.
Now that you bring it up... YOU ARE RIGHT.
"Didn't I tell you... I hate waiting," the man said and closed his hand into a fist.
Action · Katekichi
Handsome meat? Lmfao XD
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Urban · sagorika_adhikari
I think it should be "waited" and not wait.
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Urban · sagorika_adhikari
Loved this description.
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Urban · sagorika_adhikari
Hmmm... You tell more and show less.
ch 0 1 The Beginning
Fantasy · Ian_Gab
who?
"Didn't I tell you... I hate waiting," the man said and closed his hand into a fist.
Action · Katekichi
OP
I have the ability to influence the forces of nature. Almost any element is under my control. All I gotta do is know the makeup and origin.
Action · OtaQ
Oi Oi Oi... Amaterasu??? XD
Ruby nodded, quickly pressing his fist against her chest, focusing her mind and slowing her breathing. Her eyes shot open before yelling " Come forth, Amaterasu!" Her Mental projection field shot from her body, the light almost dimming the classroom. Behind her was a large spirit like entity, standing tall with a blade lacking a hilt
Action · OtaQ
Loved this line.
Although there is truth to the saying "Everything must die, some sooner than later." Some cannot handle that.
Action · OtaQ
probably hentai lol
I need to stop watching weird stuff, Akira told himself; my mind keeps coming up with some weird dreams.
Attack On Angels
Action · Katekichi