👌👀 cool, it's really looking good, just keep it up😎
ophfff, hermione though, but I like the story, it has credible backstory, and a intriguing storyline so far, looking forward to this story going forward. Incredible writing quality and everything just make so much sense! any who my review will probably show that the 2 first chapter are captivating🥳 will not say much but so far so good and I have already added it my library which is quite rare for such a novel. (would love if he got a animagus form during his school years, like a badger or whatever?)😁😁 continue the good story and I will be a faithful reader. might update this if you post a few more chapters just to be up to speed so to speak.🙈💥💥💥
jau!🥳 this is getting interesting
i love it, so cute😍🙈
om ready to read more😉
why can't we give powerstones?🤔🤔
this is great
fiddle would fit nicely
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you have alot if incomplete sentencing, like subject and object in the sentences needs to be corrected, the premise of the story is not that bad, but the structure of almost every sentence also missed nuances. Could be good if you are able to fix this👌😁