Please Please get his level straightened out . I mean it's not that hard to keep up with
Please decide on what level you want Kain to be because it's very confusing when you can't make up your own mind
How did Kain go from level 2 down to 0 and then to 4. If the centipede gave him 4 levels, then shouldn't he be level 6 now?
Please for love of everything ,decide what sensuality the MC is going to be and quit bouncing back and forth
so is the person a she or a he?
When he reached the 18th floor, a female employee wearing a work badge called out to him by the water dispenser, "Hey, can you help lift a water barrel?"
The Only Player in 'Child of Stardust'
Urban · The sea is water
Oh,you decided to put the second half of chapter 5 here....if you can't come up with the word count to make a chapter please don't repeat the content of previous chapters to make up for it. It really makes you look amateurish
So all you did was basically repeat the first half of the last chapter, put a different title and think people wouldn't notice just to try to make more chapters
Why is it saying that he is still at the tenth level perfection when he is supposed to have already reached the 2nd level of the next realm
please get the grammar and the people's genders right
This is getting freaking old. You just stated earlier in this chapter that he was level 11 but now he's back to level 0.
With the only remaining skill point, Kain added [Thunder Navigation].
My Level Zero System
Fantasy · Forever_Flame