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Moments 520
Correction: Mega Organization “through” the years
Hearing Long Shao Ting's words, the young Nan Hua remained indifferent. She had faced harsher training in Mega Organization thorough the years. It had already helped her to become the way she is right now.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: should they “lose”, they will lose everything OR “if” they lost, they will lose everything
Because they all knew very well that should they lost, they would lose everything.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: With his “participation” or with “him” participating “
With his participating, Heavenly General Sang had no other choice but to call back the soldiers who were at the south to fight against Great General Long, who kept on invading Shi Long Kingdom.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: where “there” were many
Shi Long Kingdom was truly also a place where they were many powerful people. No wonder this kingdom could always be so arrogant and looked down upon other kingdoms.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: It should be Qian Fei Liu and not Qing Shu Lian
He felt bored and headed to another direction and slowly made his way to a remote hallway. He knew very well that when Qing Shu Lian was talking with his father, it would take a long time.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
It would be better to say “with that in mind”
With that in thought, Lin Mei Yu closed her eyes to rest.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: To be “borne” by
The risk has to be born by themselves.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: that she used to show was not present
Any warmth and affection that she used to show has none present at this time. It was as if the two of them were a completely different person.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: Her could only “bow”
With the repeated order with the cold and chilling tone, the soldier knew that this was a non negotiable order. He could only bowed and then went back to do what Nan Hai Yan ordered him to do. It was clear that Nan Hai Yan wanted to vent all of his anger and fury on these soldiers who dared to come here.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: and will always be “the” one
And in Long Qian Xing's eyes, no beauty could ever compare to Nan Hua in the slightest bit. She was the most beautiful one and will always be one.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: Beatty is“in” the eyes of the beholder
As one had said, beauty is the eyes of the beholder.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
I think it should be Great General Long right?
It was something that Great General Wei wouldn't be able to accept.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: swallow this “loss”
He himself also needed to rest because he knew that General Ma might not be willing to swallow this lost so easily.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
I think it would be “complicated” feelings?
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Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction : “were” should be deleted
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Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: FYH yelled “hysterically”
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Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana
Correction: “Kingdom” of Shui
Princess of the Kindom of Shui... 9 years old... 16 as a living sacrifice... the Kingdom of Yun would be prosperous... Otherwise... the Kingdom of Yun would perish...
Villain Princess
Urban · MasterVII
Correction: The two “armies” fought until
The two soldiers fought and his commanders were engaging with the two generals until General Wu chose to retreat.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Maybe it would be better to word it this way - nothing was “amiss” or “lacking”
Even though they were only on a temporary trip, everything was thoroughly prepared for the two of them to make sure that nothing was left.
Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
History · Sorahana
Correction: “Through” the explosion
Thorough the explosion and so on, neither side gave up.
Astral Flower
Sci-fi · Sorahana