Lencana 103
Moments 2
Tosharc
I like the story so far, it has a decent beginning. The wordage and tense use could be improved. Overall, it has the potential to grow. [img=recommend]
I like the story so far, it has a decent beginning. The wordage and tense use could be improved. Overall, it has the potential to grow. [img=recommend]
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Fantasy · Elyon