this is a machine translation. really good tho
are we just gonna ignore the giant tree & dead monster?? hmmmmm
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BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
*Happy krieg noises intensifies*
"Don't you listen to this shameless scammer? Choose me, the god of shovels. I will give you a shovel that will instantly kill the person you hit with it !"
Guardian Of The End
Fantasy · BlackFlamer
good intro but a heck of a run on sentence
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Crimson Overlord
Fantasy · Nickaido
Why the heck do so many stories use a prophecy format?! it's such lazy writing from the author. this book was already hard to read with the obvious grammar errors, bad spelling, and now prophecy trope.
"An unchained man, followed by a purgatory witch, a raging beast, and a merciful devil. When the gates of hell open, and the sun turns black. The unholy creations of the underworld are going to ravage the land. Those four you must lead, so the sun may shine again!" Daraku repeated what the prophecy given by Amaterasu said.
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
you literally just said in the previous paragraph comments that the reason he took the question wasn't because of exp but because he took the quest in last life aka he wants revenge & something else I don't remember. anyway, keep it consistent when writing, there's so many plot holes in this book already
Cain immediately turned around, he wanted to finish this job as fast as he could! The Exp was the only reason he took this quest!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
okay so here's the thing, why are you putting these details in the comment section? add it into the story. it cheapens the story when you over explain every single thing in your book. just some friendly constructive criticism. also plenty of spelling mistakes or wrong words used.
"Sorry for having you go through this, It's done!" She said, swiftly stamping the poster.
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
I checked scribblehub and it has like 70ish chapters posted. I really enjoy this story and thank for you for all the smiles & laughs. When can we expect scribblehub to be updated? thanks & Goodluck with the move!
I played world of warcraft since 2004.. then finally quit 3 years ago.. I made sure to delete my account to make sure it 5 unrecoverable. you put enough time into a game & decide to quit you'll do the exact same thing! it's completely realistic to me to have it happen. it ain't no plot device lol
Moreover, Lin Chen had also seen that those who mocked or ridiculed him had all deleted their accounts. When the game officially stopped and the monsters began to invade the world, it would be their doomsday!
Becoming Invincible in the Game-Invaded World
Sci-fi · Stepping on the Azure Sky