BobbyCSB

BobbyCSB

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Story Critic, Archer, Gamer. I will be extremely critical about your book quality. However, it should have no impact on your enjoyment if you love your books.

2018-09-27 Bergabung Malaysia
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BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

Submariners don't use open fire. Depending on country, they would always note tube number and launch munition type. "Tube 1, Torpedo Seeker. Launched."

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

Planes use power levers to actuate power to the engine. The feet are used for tail control.

With that said, the German fighters pressed their gas pedals and flew as fast as they could back to Singapore without looking back to where they had just wiped out an entire Japanese fighter squadron. 

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BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

So says the sis-con himself.

"That boy is way too overprotective of his sister. I believe we used to call guys like him a sis-con..."

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BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Replied to romeotango148

Compared to meth, it has drawbacks too. I work in a Pharmaceutical company related to production of epinephrine. Trust me, Adderall is just as bad as meth even if it is widely used to treat ADHD and Narcolepsy.

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Replied to romeotango148

Adderall has many drawbacks to it. There is no such thing as a pill with zero drawbacks.

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Replied to bigbeeboyhere

Additionally, a system does not need to provide him quests or rewards. It just needs to work with the user to provide him answers in which he or she can infer results from as well as analysing data that could benefit the user. THAT is a system. Does the MC uses this? Yes? Then it is a system user. I understand that you might love this story, but buddy I am criticizing in terms of writing quality, character developments and plot tracks. Stop wasting my time on trying to argue if he uses a system by your definition or not. I'm calling this story crap because objectively it is crap. If you love it, good. Enjoy it. My review should have NO effect on you. Piss off.

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Replied to bigbeeboyhere

Sir, a skill that analyzes and thus provides him answers as well as previous experience to overcome challenges is a system. Period. /ˈsɪstəm/ / a set of things working together as parts of a mechanism or an interconnecting network; a complex whole.

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

Siri, play Sharp Dressed Man by ZZ Top please 😂😂😂

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

What even...

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSB
2 years ago
Commented

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The diesel stuck to the Kaiser's muscles and created the appearance of a Golden God. Which Berengar was more than happy to play the role of. More than one woman in the crowd gazed at the man's oiled, athletic figure and blushed. It was not the kind of sight you saw every day. 

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