DarkDawning - Profile

The writing quality is decent. I find that the plot of the story is good (as of chapter 22). The specifics that I want to talk about is how the story looks cliche(because there was a trend of NPC in Overlord fanfics) but is quite full of substance.From my understanding, we start out with an MC that's quite optimistic/excited at the prospect of reincarnation, a bit morbid but understable because the MC gets to have abilities unlike his previous life. That's where it gets interesting , we shift from here to where we see the MC showing grief, having truly bonded silently in service to their creator. Character design I'll say is debatable so I'm putting it at 4 stars, to be optimistic.Updating stability is in the same boat.Where I'm particular is world building. The descriptions feel a bit lackluster, I would have a hard time immersing myself if not for the provided images and me being familiar about the Overlord media.TLDR;criticism on world building

Five stars all around, finally finished the novel today and I feel fulfilled. It was truly a 'Magical Journey'Excellent writing quality due to consistency of work, Story development is done well because of great pacing, Character Design was also good because character action was in line with personality shown, Updating stability is excellent because it can ve seen that it is one of the few stories that is completedWorld background is what I wanted to talk about in depth because generally I set it at 4 stars or lower because an author is using a setting that is set by another writer. Why i think this fiction deserves 5 stars is because compared to some othrr novels, the author of this fiction has expanded on the setting in a way that made sense, made it exciting and made it fresh. A big problem generally in fanfiction is the lack of innovation in a setting and so i applaud the author on the new elements they added. The added elements were tied in completely ,to innovate and do it well is something worthy of applause. An example of this is 'soulbond' HP fics if done well then it makes for something heart-warming but do it bad then well... this added element just detracted from the whole story and it comes off as 'cringe'tldr; fic is worth reading, you should read it

Just... Writing is fine, it's eligible But the pacing is horrendous The character personality does not make sense with the reincarnations. While the genre it's fiction . A story must be still grounded in some way. Even Cultivation novels have some rules to them but the story presents itself loosely .Plot elements put in so haphazardly. Stability is mediocre since it has only been 15 chapters The world explored as of current is trash. Nothing is explained except that It's "Heaven", Naruto world and MCU world. It looks like a mess to me.