Lencana 22
Moments 6
cjase97
This Is definitely an ok story but the characters dont really feel like they are people
cjase97
Overall i believe the story so far is quite decent and enjoyable to read i wish the chapters were a bit longer since its already requiring coins and fast passes but other than the chapters being kind short i see no issues with the story so far
cjase97
3rd because why not
cjase97
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
The story itself was a tad lacking but it was wonderfully drawn and it’s characters were designed beautifully if I had just one suggestion to the author and design team it would be to slow the pace just a little bit and let the story take a more fluid motion .
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· Qi Xiaoguai