DaoistWitch

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Witch, daoist, qilin, trash, warrior, traveller, who knows? Someone probably, but I do not .......

2018-09-10 Bergabung Global
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DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
1 years ago
Posted

The story starts quite interesting but later it is quick with lack of depth. All the potential of some characters was lost .... I am disappointed in the end

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
2 years ago
Commented

Yes, I liked the story. But a chapter a month proves to make us lacking details of previous chapters. And slowly builds lack of interests in the book.

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
2 years ago
Commented

I really like this story but I hate to read this mixed letters in every word every two paragraphs. It looks like this story is stolen from somewhere :(([img=update]

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
2 years ago
Commented

Does it chapter needs to be a kind of a words puzzle?

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
2 years ago
Commented

There are lines upon lines of misspelled words to the extent that the word misspelled is a benign comparison to the fact that it is total gibberish. And it happens in many novels. Discouraging to continue using webnovel.

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
3 years ago
Commented

Nice portrayal of men's "stupidity" about things that are important for their wives :)

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
3 years ago
Replied to eternal_bliss

Now His mightyness will have to go out off the clouds and take a look at his relationship with his "dear" wife or rather real wife :) I like it :)

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
3 years ago
Replied to Iamdasd

Especially that he does not care about her at all. He cares about his imagination and his good state. But to her he is indifferent and dismissive. Pity. I do not like him at all.

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
3 years ago
Replied to

I think it is more than a simple misunderstanding. It is misunderstanding due to over-protectiveness, lack of communication leading to lack of trust.

DaoistWitch
DaoistWitch
3 years ago
Commented

The Author said that Lord Xi will learn about Rui distrust but it does not seem that way. It seems that Lord Xi ignores Rui. Therefore it make sens Rui does not trust Lord Xi at all.