RJBehemoth

RJBehemoth

male LV 14

Y'all don't wanna know

2018-09-05 Bergabung Global
Lencana 14

Moments 129
RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
1 months ago
Commented

At least get the names right. It's the bare minimum we ask for

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
2 months ago
Commented

What can they even achieve in 4 hours? should be 5-6 at least

9am to 5pm was off the table, replaced by 10am to 2pm.

Rise To Stardom

Rise To Stardom

Urban · Caeruleum_

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
2 months ago
Commented

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His face was burning in confusion. Cheating was one of the crucial crimes against wrestling rules, anyone who cheated wouldn't be spared. It was a deed punished with direct eviction.

Pro Wrestling System

Pro Wrestling System

Sports · Sixtee

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
6 months ago
Commented

This mistake seems to be happening again and again. The author either doesn't know basketball or doesn't make it clear enough that this is a few plays later

As Peng Yang lazily passed the ball to his teammate, Kai saw his opportunity. 

Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog

Basketball System: Rebound of the Underdog

Sports · SandKastle

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
9 months ago
Commented

He must be the fastest formula one driver ever!

A few days had passed. Breeze, now known as Max Charles, got used to his new situation and learned a few things.

Greatest Streamer System

Greatest Streamer System

Fantasy · ShuviLily

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
9 months ago
Commented

So many mistakes. I can barely keep reading at this rate. Please use Grammarly or ChatGPT to edit this.

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
1 years ago
Commented

The only valid answer is Joy

"Now, for the next question. Who is the hottest among the K-pop girl group Red velvet? You need to think hard before answering" After that Alex waited.

Interdimensional Farming in Another World

Interdimensional Farming in Another World

Fantasy · Sailfish

RJBehemoth
RJBehemoth
1 years ago
Commented

If the goal of making the MC this dumb was to drive away most of your potential readers, well GG, you've made a terrific start.