make him face off against all the emperor's in one piece like white beard and peak Luffy gear 5 mode.
you missed a good opportunity there to basically sing the frozen song when describing how you built the castle man. it would have been epic, rewrite this chapter please it's too much of a waste for you not to.
I was literally thinking of doing a Winx club fanfiction i even started to rewatch the show but you beat me to the punch
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with all the adults leaving the island of women would be ungraded regardless of protection. their strongest fighter wonder women will not be on the island so she will be sent away regardless of whatever magical shielding bull you try to sling that the island has. there is no reason to wait 3 years for something you can take now. you can also just take the other boxes to. raid Atlantis, and any other special place with annoying people or defence easily.
that is the exact same thing i was going to say
author the avatar universe doesn't have magic only bending . bending is not magic. the original creators of the show were very clear about that so please stop insulting them
you said ever female NPC then does that mean the ugly squid lady torturer that's apart of the five worst. if so than good luck.
I would really prefer something unconventional like this. Ghost -> wraith --> ancient spirit -> eldritch spirit --> outer god. This build is pure curse and magic focused but for a good reason it's because as a spirit you can possess things so recommend you create an op golem that is pure warrior focused hopefully a monk and super impose the stats.
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original Cursed Liberator
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A passion burns inside the heart of everyone. It's spark may have bloomed during the most unlikely of times for strange and even the most unappealing of things till it kindled into a raging fire that you have long lost control of, but we must all thank the flame that helped shape our very essence. In a strange new world filled with marvellous works crafted from iron and powered by steam there lived a changed man. For his desire of knowledge about a history long buried he discovered secrets that shattered a well crafted illusion forcing him into a new life on the high seas. Where the danger isn't just from his previous king, but also from the navy, pirates, monsters from the ocean depths, and uncharted lands that he has to cross to liberate his world. Announcement: Books can also be found and read on a website called royal road. Under the username Blackguardnovels. This is an alternative account.40 Chs 333 Koleksi
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One Piece: Rise of The Orokin
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In a harsh world on the brink of civil war where pirates run amok and navy soldiers desperately try to subdue them. Comes a man not from that world but more familiar with it then others will ever know. Aided with a system that bestowed upon him knowledge from beyond the stars. Watch how one man will reshape a well known story to how he sees fit. This is a one piece fanfic with a warframe system. [you do not have to know anything about warframe to read this story] If You like this story please consider reading my origins novel Titled - UNUSUAL WORLD, and CURSED LIBERATOR.43 Chs 2.4k Koleksi
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Unusual world
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What is the truth? What is reality? Could the end actually be the beginning? In a world were ancient beings walk beside you, guard people against the uniqueness of the world and powerful creatures around them. While trying to obtain the truth of everything and reach the pinnacle of magic. They face new contenders that make there already harrowing world that much difficult and strange. Resulted from a battle of immense proportions against beings incomprehensible, as they clash the void shatters cracks are left all over souls from all across different worlds and dimensions are free once more. This is were our story beings this is the journey of a man who leads to the spread of uncertainty. Disclaimer: I don't own the image provided.154 Chs 865 Koleksi
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Untold journey
Creeping steadily From the darkness of the universe is the shadow that will bring hardships unimagined along with endless beauty. A journey across the stars to worlds unknown to mankind. Danger is given when traversng the unknown yet, its also what helps set you free. [This book is only paused not dropped I will continue it when my second book Unusual world is in a good place]4 Chs 6 Koleksi
author you should add disenchantment as a world to visit because of all the stupid adventures you'll have
Osmosian Sorcerer?!
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