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LV 13
2018-08-08 Bergabung Global
Lencana 6

Moments 17
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1 years ago
Commented

and it was at that moment that he knew that he F**ked UP

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2 years ago
Commented

Amazing chapter great use of music 🎶

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2 years ago
Posted

Excellent story with Great progression good character development and excellent planning. good use oft the gotcha essences Meta Nice to see one not watered down

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2 years ago
Commented

realistically Eric would need to F*up big time for him to die. also your version seems to calmed down a lot might benefit from having a mentor who already achieved his dream.

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2 years ago
Commented

I love the way you handled that situation, awesome. can't wait to see where you take the story.

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