The whole 2-4 word sentences is aweful as well. Not to mention the constantly repeating the same thing over and over.
He’s gotta pad that word count.
But before the blade could make contact, a shadow loomed behind Roderick. The sound of rushing wind filled the air, and then—
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Same, probably going to drop it since the author has repeatedly done this.
This is one messed up as well like the last one
His arm suddenly tensed, his hand flicking as he threw a staggering amount of sand at Zekaron's eyes, instantly covering his vision.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
Don’t forget about the massive amount of filler.
Yeah, but once he decided to put this one on hold to finish BoDS, it became pretty much irregular releases. We all thought he would focus on it once it finished but…. Had a month or 2 of solid releases then started dropping off.
It’s pretty much has always been this way
Yeah he did for that one, but he only did that for this one for maybe a month tops and that was over a year ago. the updates have only dwindled for this one. Lol he even put this one on hiatus while he finished botds saying so he can focus on it to finish it then focus on this one. Lol the moment botds ended, did we get the same updates for this one? No… and we are barely getting 3 chapters a day now and seems like it will soon get to only one a week.
"[For the Emperor]!" Lord Mighty cried, his huge figure turning into a bullet that vertically pierced the sky.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos