real life exhaustion and I didn't think it would be that key with upcoming chapters. but a few people have mentioned it now, so I may have to reconsider and see if I can insert one
it's definitely a conundrum for Dom, appreciate the thoughts/feedback as always
I did it just for you! your feedback made sense, and it was annoying me as well!
"I am Lazarus, Lord of Riverside." Dom announced as he stood in front of the doors. "I have come to talk as requested, I advice you to open the doors and surrender so that we can speak easier."
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Fantasy · TheMightyPerez
I tried to summarise it in a couple of sentences in this chapter, about how they promised them safety etc but then betrayed them when entering. There are reasons why I made it shorter, and hopefully in the next couple of chapters you'll understand why. if you don't like the flow then and think I should include more, please let me know as I'll rewrite/include more in this chapter for future readers! appreciate your support as always!
thank you so much, very appreciated!
as often as I can! I write in the evenings after work so depends on what family time etc allows. aiming for 3 a week
It was a good idea, I'll post something similar on the Discord
within the next week or so, then it will be 2 a week. I had wrote a couple during the last few months, but now I'm not happy with them!
thats what I'm doing currently to make sure I haven't missed anything massive out. Wow so many spelling errors early on!
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original World Conquest Online
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Dominic Lazarus is persuaded by his roommates to join a new MMORPG - World Conquest Online, the biggest and most realistic Virtual Reality Game in History. The modern world is in a state of peace after a recent world war, but political strife is still high, with the world walking on a tight rope. Will World Conquest Online give the people the escape they need? Join Dom as he tries to battle his real life issues, with the game that seems to be taking over his life, and the worlds.187 Chs 2.2k Koleksi
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Wheel of Life
After an accident, Mark awakens in a void. A voice appears in his head and gives him the choice to spin the wheel of life. Return to life, Reincarnate into a new realm, or Lucky Dip. Follow the story of Mark as he tries to create a safe place for himself and others in this new world.40 Chs 213 Koleksi
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The Renegade Prince
The story follows a young Prince, fearing for his life from his Uncle, the Tyrant. He leaves his kingdom to Journey the world and find a safe place to call home. Set 10,000 years after an apocalypse wipes most of the human race from the Planet. The modern world is full of dangerous creatures and surprises. Soon after his journey starts, he stumbles across some life changing luck.... ....... Author note: Bit of fluff at the start to set the story in place, please bare with it. Aiming for a chapter a day, currently posting 1 every 2 days.8 Chs 7 Koleksi
no it's not dropped, my 1 year old has made writing difficult in the evenings. Should have 2 or 3 chapters posted this week!
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Fantasy · TheMightyPerez