author. there are multiple paragraphs copied on this chapter
if we think of the dugeon as a living thing the you might be right. then again even if its the stomach, it still seems sick. nobody wants their stomach acid overflowing the stomach
Author/Translator, this chapter is still a chapter that looks to be a future chapter misplaced. please fix or explain.
"conjure' is used wrong in this chapter. i think you meant to use "conjecture" meaning Rey's initial thoughts / guess
Author/ Translator. you have put this chapter in the wrong spot.
it cant have been a few hours ago. you said he stayed in the farm for 2 weeks did he leave sometimes during the 2 weeks?
how can he ask around during the ladt two weeks when he was alone in the farm. please fix that to make sense
translator you left a bit of editing text on this chapter "Please enter the transaltion" or something like that half way through the chapter
even the title says they are supposed to be beavers. author/translator please fix this chapter.
hey author, i noticed you used "Lex" when referring to the maincharacter here which is the mc of your other book.
The Eldrim Cards Legacy
Fantasy · lifesketcher