A suggestion to focus more on the protaganist, multiple pov sometimes works, but its becoming tiring in this case, currently at chapter 45, progress of mc is lacking
It's 11th grade so they're 17 and 18 years old (I didn't include 16 since they're probably oncoming 12th grade students)
"Senior Lu Yan, you're really too impressive. I'm in my second year of high school. Senior Lu Yan, can you come to my house to tutor me tonight? My parents aren't home."
Games · Frozen Tenderness
The dragon Warrior
“This boy is not bad at all. He has what it takes to become…,” he mumbled to himself. His thoughts remained unknown to the rest of the world.
Fantasy · Genrei
Honestly, just for the fun of it, I can see people doing that (including me if I'm rich but not for a month)
“This boy is quite considerate. I’ve pretended to be a beggar at this place for a month, and no one has given me any food,” he mumbled to himself. The man slowly rose up to his feet, looked left and right for a bit, and walked towards a certain direction.
Fantasy · Genrei
Yup, but not here, I read around 700,000 words every 3-4 days I guess.
News From The Future?
Urban · Mirage
Take your time author, also just lost someone to cancer so yeah make the best of it
Why does this feel so wholesome, great writing author.
And when you are done, we will meet again so that I can see how you ended it. Though I hope you make it an interesting one.
Fantasy · Shink_a
Could you give a brief summary of what happened? cause I forgot some details after the hiatus. Like there was a chapter that explained the relationship and thoughts of those in camelot
"You guys are no fun. It reminds me of the old days." Paul sighed. "Ok, then I want you to strike my name from Camelot's roster. The guy you replaced me with doesn't deserve the name."
Games · Antihero
Try, Mediterranean hegemon of ancient Greece, it's one of the best novels you can find in novelupdates
At the same time, the European medieval agriculture was so low that it did not match the shoes of the Ming Dynasty. Wheat per acre in Europe is better in the Italian region, which can reach 150 kg to 200 kg per acre. In other regions, the yield per acre is generally about 100 kg. Of course, this is also related to the current climate. After all, this era is a "small ice age" and the temperature is low. But more reasons are that European farming techniques are extremely low. They don't know how to apply fertilizer, and the plow for arable land is also very backward.
War · Artimer
Edit: Came to like Uther and the northern prince It really just needs less focus on other characters but I love the details
Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the Mercenary king
War · Allevatore_dicapre