God_Of_All

God_Of_All

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God_Of_All
3 years ago
Posted

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God_Of_All
3 years ago
Posted

For Marvel half: Ok so I don't usually do reviews but the character design of the protagonist is just shit it's like he has no personality at all, ok the author tries to show the protagonist's motivation by killing off his parents and he's then on a quest to make a machine to go to a parallel universe, personally I would have seen the character at least attempt the magical route regardless if he's allowed by the Ancient One or not. Now author attempts to show the MC's reaction to his parents death by making him become unsociable but then his interactions with characters like MJ make it seem like he's sociable and on another note he also ignored a massive red flag which led to uncle Ben's death and I'm like what??????????!!!!! it's just frustrating as I don't understand why Gwen and MJ like him with such a dead personality conversations are like hello, hi, let's have ***, bye and that's it the end. his personality is so dead and it annoys me so much plus it's inconsistent!!!! like ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! yeah that's my rant. peace out

God_Of_All
God_Of_All
3 years ago
Replied to HotIce

is he at least street smart? or maybe quick on his feet like not in too much detail but at least to the extent of getting a good grasp of the situation or is he like punch first talk later?

God_Of_All
God_Of_All
3 years ago
Replied to STRO

I can see quite a few grammatical errors so do you need an editor? Add me on discord and I'll edit your existing and future chapters.

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God_Of_All
3 years ago
Commented

O think people still don't know the scale of Hirotos power can we get a reaction of them from a serious punch please

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God_Of_All
3 years ago
Replied to The_High_Father

hey I know it's not canabalism but please since they're god's or whatever but please no more white ape meat. wait they are all black dudes so are they still white apes? anyway you get what I mean

"Well, I got this some time ago. The small box contains a heart shaped herb that can increase the user's response capabilities and reactions, while the larger box contains white ape meat, which can increase the strength, durability and stamina of the person who ate it." I told them while briefly explaining the content of each box.

Marvel: A God's Journey.

Marvel: A God's Journey.

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