Not gonna lie, the image of mj with 8 eyes and spider legs(even if its of energy) is quite disgusting jaja Good story bro, keep the chapters coming!.
What kind of AU its going to be bro? I really like red hood, i liked his journey and training with the contacts of talia, and also when he come back to gotham, but i always hated when he goes against batman, he would loose every time, the plot armor of batman is annoying. I think jason would beat the batfamily a lot, but they had to put batman always first in the comics to make him the "best". I will await more chapters to see what you make, i loved your other story, so i have great expectations with this one.
Really innecesary showing his heat vision and xray, he should keep it to defeat/kill omniman or othe viltrumites.
just cut damon legs and stop bugging the chapters with their inner toughts bro, i prefer seeing him training and learning how good he is with magic and what he learn than watching the plot armored idiots salvatores. We know you are not going to do anything to them permantly.
I wanted to him to travel the galaxy learning from force and non force sects, i tough he was going to alter the chip of the clones and only reveal himself against palps, but i will await to see what you make.
Every time they say the others are going to atack it is really cringe for me some reason. Its good that you are back.
lol, it took a couple of minutes to the viltrumites to find about mark, and then travel the galaxy to the house of that particulary alien. Good story btw.
I really hope she really dies, i hate the other side and their god complex.
Alexa nyugen, is she an OC?
I hope you do something about this, because this was all so pointless that is not even funny. Making an enemy of the jedi for the heck of it, no reason at all? He could have knock them all and leave, but he murdered the people just because.
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