no dickgirl. bad author.
"Then there's that.....this must be one of Merlin's tricks, wherever Merlin is I will make them pay."
I Died And Reincarnated Into Marvel as Goddess Artoria
Anime & Comics · GoddessArtoria
don't most hispanic moms use mijo? Hijo is like informal or something right?
"Ah, sorry hijo, I spoke too soon."
An Engineer In Night City
Video Games · Ryuanwrites
I fee like the author does a good job of background for people who don't quite know who the author has chosen to emulate with their MC. The writing quality is also top tier for the site but there are some errors here and there. The powers and scaling feel pretty equal with the Marvel universe to a believable level. The story also progresses with a steady pace and I am already falling in love with the story. I am definitely looking forward to see how the story progresses going forward. A++++ author-san please don't drop <3
The writing quality of the story definitely reads like some lame chinese translation. With all the usual culprits, like certain wording, its especially noticeable in the hero exam chapters with the whole *imaginary robot* thing and the green skinned robots. Also All mights disciple? please, that's so dumb. Updates seem ok? but its early and I think there is a lot of suspicion of this being a stolen translated work. Story development is terrible if I am being honest, the MC seems to be trying to be that cringey "cool" guy in most chinese fics. Also the typical thug types with the extras? This goes hand in hand with the Character design, I personally feel the Main character gets his powers too soon, I feel we would have liked a more drawn out skill progression story where he explores his abilities instead of becoming impossibly strong from the very beginning. Obviously the world background here doesn't really matter with pre-established ground work laid out by the creators of MHA. Overall I think my review if fair for this work, the author, if this work truly isn't stolen or a translation work I would look into rewriting the story, it has a lot of potential with a unique powerset that I feel is honestly more well explored in line with the power progression of the story.
+1
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Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template
TV · Ninja_King_3834
really should edit this one. seems weird to repeat what she said. don't let the ai do all the work.
With a reluctant sigh, he nodded, recognizing the truth in her words. "Okay, but I'll go after dropping you off."
The Night Wolf : A Teen Wolf Fanfic
TV · Ave_Lucifer
loving the story so far. any plans on a patre.on?
I'm honestly surprised with this one. I love the story so far, the pain is good the chapter lengths are longer than 90 percent of what's on webnovel and the story is original. love that you used the Phoenix fruit, it honestly fits with the universe of teen wolf. the mc is also likeable while not sex crazed like most people make their stories. overall I'm looking forward to this story, author San, please start up a patreo..n with a couple advanced chapters I'd like to read more and I'm willing to pay for it. love this novel so far!!!!
surface of the sun? a quick Google search says the atmosphere alone is nearly 10k degrees celcius. which is 18k degrees Fahrenheit. the actual surface and core are measured in Kelvin because of the ludicrous temperatures reaching the millions in celcius. you put him at 4k.
The Professor smiled, "Impressive control. Your heat vision is almost as hot as the surface of the sun, and yet you can manage and control the amount of heat radiating from it. I wish Scott could control optical beams like that, but unfortunately, he's like an open tap, always pouring out without a way to make it stop."
Marvel: gojo of the seven sets
Anime & Comics · Fredozy
Just for reference the coin is necessary. Electro "Magnetic" railgun, they shoot slugs at sub sonic speeds using electricity. You literally need the coins cause they were a specific tungsten alloy for her electricity to launch. If you're gonna steal work, know what you're stealing.
Kaminari's triumphant roar echoed louder than the explosion that followed. As fire and lightning engulfed the giant robot, Kaminari stood on the rooftop, his blonde hair blowing in the wind, looking every bit the hero he aspired to be.
My Hero Academia: Thunder God
Anime & Comics · Junkdog