Please remember the characters you’re writing are 11 year olds 😅
Someone else is already translating this fic and is much further than you
So the MC is a puppy that just gets lead along by Dumbledoor (however you spell his name)… got it
You need to fix the changes in perspective the ‘he’ to ‘I’
Aah I know what's happening, should I spoil it?
And so the dreaded curse strikes again. A name that doesn’t fit the setting
Buku ini telah dihapus.
Idk what happened but as soon as it hit ch 100 it became Wuxiafied 🥲 I was so confused… ‘mad demon jariah’, random names started popping up, the dialogue felt like it was transforming into a wuxia novel. I’m just waiting for him to start cultivating atp
Wtf is mad demon?😭
Trying really hard not to judge with the start, so we’ll see how this goes
But it said Madara opened his as a child in the original 🥲
Naruto: About the Fact That my Brother is Madara
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