This author's note shouldn't be here, and that information should be told narratively.
Raven rubbed her cheek, "Nate telepathically 'punched' me in the face. He is resisting me. If it wasn't now I would have admired his defenses while being unconscious." [A/N: She didn't know that it wasn't Nathan that had been resisting her attempts. The nth metal amulet rested on Nathan's chest and it was where she had focused her healing ability, which made it block her ability. Him lashing out at her was indeed Nathan's passive defense though after her power build-up to a dangerous degree.]
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
You interrupt your own story way too often with your author's notes. Good luck.
Judging from the grammar, I can only assume English is a second or third language. Good luck with your story!
Nice copypasta.
How does he not notice a giant dude running at him while inside a room with them?
Seeing his chance, Viserys casts a Ray of Frost and sees the farthest knight freeze in place. He did not stop. He continued to cast his Ray of Frost until the knight's entire body froze solid. However, while he is focused on casting his spell, Viserys does not see Gregor charging at him and swinging down his sword.
Silver Prince
Book&Literature · Fangrove
So much cringe.
Aegis said and undressed his shirt with both Willow and running. Weiss blushed when they saw his perfect body full of muscles...
Aegis Schnee The Juggernaut Of Glyphs
Others · Nisiris
I mean, even in canon chakra isn't something native to the humans of Naruto. It was first spread by Hagoromo. Sure, pretty much everyone has it by the time the story takes place, given however many generations later, but the point remains that "no chakra" was the natural state and it isn't a stretch that the occasional person wouldn't inherit the magic juice.
This kind of anomaly is EXACTLY the type of thing a soldier would tell his superior. Especially given that Minato doesn't know what "it" was, and it's in their village.
"It's nothing Hokage-sama!"
Naruto: The Weapon Shop Owner
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
Hopefully the longer time between updates will result in a higher quality.
Bab ini telah dihapus.
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Anime & Comics · Sennengoroshi
I felt it was information that should have been told in the story itself. Author's notes mid-story always break the rhythm.
A/N: I think it was the first time I did an Author Note mid-chapter in which I explained something instead of a placeholder for pictures. Did it break the flow of the chapter, is it better to have it at the end like I usually do it? Let me know.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel