I'm loving the story so far! The pace of the story is just right. Chapter updates are consistent, though it would be better if it was 2chaps/day, haha. Anyway, I'm not forcing you, its just my selfish wish haha. Chapter length are just right. I like the character interactions. As for world building, it would have been better to introduce a little bit of the countries/kingdoms/empires mentioned, just one or two paragraph is enough of an introduction. That's all I can say at the moment. Again, love the story and hope for more chapters!
I like the story. I would just like to point out one thing, this is awfully a lot like the light novel "Reborn as a Space Mercenary; I woke up Piloting the Strongest Starship". The plot, the sequence of events, the characters, their backgrounds and story, are all uncannily similar. The novel has 11 volumes to date and is published by seven seas entertainment.
No problem!
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Livestream: Unlimited Experience
Urban · YouthGod
shouldn't it be 10,003 pesos? since he received 5,000 for the singing achievement.
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Livestream: Unlimited Experience
Urban · YouthGod
It's been that long huh?
Von Strauss grabbed a handkerchief from the corner of his desk and delicately wiped the camera clean, his lips curling into a slight sneer as he did so. He inspected the contents of the camera where he saw an armada stationed off the coast. There are battleships, aircraft carriers, a cruiser, and destroyers. Such a magnificent fleet and a grand design made his brows furrow. As far as he knows, there is no Triesenese Fleet stationed or near the Kingdom of Zambesi. Whom could it belong to? Britannia, Francais, Ruthenia, Fredonia? But the flag fluttering on the mast of each ship was none of these. Instead, it was a flag he had never seen before.
Reincarnated with a Country Creation System
War · SorryImJustDiamond
Well the only people who has full access to the game are officials, so this is not surprising. Security measures are only against 3rd party users.
"I've looked at your IP address and it seems you're near the capital. Would it be possible for us to meet offline?"
The Shelter Game: Me, Starting with a Tenfold Drop Rate
Urban · BigWhiteGoose
welcome back!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Welcome back!! 🎉🎊
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original Throne of Kings
Atlas Brahm is a prince from the Kingdom of Alteria. Alteria is a large kingdom located at the continent of Tales. Alteria has a tradition where after the heir has come of age, he is tasked to leave the capital and develop his own territory. This tradition has been passed from generation to generation. How will Atlas be able to develop his territory? How will he cope with the challenges of ruling a territory? Will he be able to rise in power and prove that he is worthy to ascend the throne? Watch as Atlas develop his territory from a measly little village to a grand city. ---------- This is my very first novel as an author. There may be cliche situations in the story but i will try my best to improve my writing. Reminder: I have a very bad naming sense, so I may intentionally or unintentionally use the names of characters and places from other works. Do note that the characters and places from my novel are my own works and does not have any resemblance from other works. Enjoy reading (^__^)3 Chs 3 Koleksi
Work at your own pace. Balance studies, the story, and rest. A well rested body and mind can result in better grades, and better story. Keep up the good work!
You need to Level Up General!
Fantasy · mszrswrite