UpsidedownTurtle

LV 13
2018-01-10 Bergabung Global
Lencana 8

Moments 5
UpsidedownTurtle
UpsidedownTurtle
4 months ago
Commented

What's up with this pointless aggression towards the AI author? Just tone down the enthusiasm as part of your writing.

"Shut up." Li Yuan interrupted directly, "I want all the information on Marrow Cleansing, including the purchase price and the access requirements."

High-Level Martial Era

High-Level Martial Era

Eastern · Beacon Immortal

UpsidedownTurtle
UpsidedownTurtle
5 months ago
Commented

Shouldn't the hobgoblins have lost quite a lot of their force. How are they still 100k strong?

Ten thousand Orcs against a 100,000-strong Hobgoblin army.

Spirit Game

Spirit Game

War · MiuNovels

UpsidedownTurtle
UpsidedownTurtle
5 months ago
Commented

remarkable feat

While Rain spoke nervously, Hana observed him with a smile on her face. "There he goes again," she thought to herself. "Trying to downplay what he's achieved. A remarkable fit that no one else could probably do."

Spirit Game

Spirit Game

War · MiuNovels

UpsidedownTurtle
UpsidedownTurtle
5 months ago
Commented

Not sure I understand how Ken hasn't spoken to Ai about his selection nor how he's yet to read her message. Does not compute.

UpsidedownTurtle
UpsidedownTurtle
2 years ago
Commented

It should be "Earther" not "Earthener".

Still, at that moment, there were three familiar figures watching on from Keafir City. Compared to Hargrove City, their walls were the picture of piece without a single Eartherner within several kilometers. 

Dimensional Descent

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec