author is set on using "Itsuki my boy" anywhere. reads weird. also "Itsuki big brother"
"Itsuki my boy is right, Gary. Even I'm surprised to see a regional variant here in Kanto. Well it makes sense since this egg came from Alola."
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I too think there was one year difference.
oak said "his daughter just gave birth" in one paragraph and in another daisy informed him her mother is going to give birth soon. an I missing something here? your use of "ho ho" sounds/reads weird. I wish there was no limit to number of moves learned by Pokémon (for all Pokémon, not just MC's); only hard training required.
another scam chapter
bad writing ruins the story.
I am confused reading these comments. I have yet to see a half decent romance plot in webnovels. I have seen the romance tag attached to many but have been disappointed so far. I also can't see what people see in antisocial, killing addict, evil MC's.
disappointing chapters. if these chapters were a necessity for your plot, you could have put it all in a single chapter.
also as shown by the ability to create the seal for danger awareness- the system can create new or advance potion recipe, spells, rituals, enchantments etc. Don't hesitate to use it author. MC can start a magical Revolution. also magitech.
the author should remember that the system could create a single book or multiple volumes based on difficulty for each subject based on all the books the MC has scanned. he has already done so for the exercise and nutrition book. this is a very powerful ability you have given to the system, don't nerf or forget it.
I don't like levels, and other game mechanics and logics used in Pokémon fanfic, and the writing is a bit weird for me to read. So this is as far I can go.
Pokémon: A Reincarnated Tale
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