BJB_san

BJB_san

male LV 15

I'm just like any other bookworm most days. I plan to one day write one of my own.

2017-12-31 Bergabung United States
Lencana 16

Moments 78
BJB_san
BJB_san
1 months ago
Commented

Those actions were completely unnecessary at that moment. To cause chaos for no discernible reason when they're just doing their jobs was uncalled for. He should have just gone with them while they make sure he was defending himself. Even if they wanted to punish him for murder the girls would have helped him escape at that point. Completely unnecessary for the situation.

BJB_san
BJB_san
1 months ago
Commented

I thought this was an ultimate skill?

BJB_san
BJB_san
1 months ago
Replied to Luna_J006

You could have easily called it stamina to reduce confusion.

'Holy shit… I was bummed out by the fact that I didn't get some kind of radioactive Skill, but an increase of 100 Stat Points is more than enough. Not only that, but Endurance… My Endurance Points went from 50 to more than 1000, this is insane!'

Reborn as an Evolving Space Monster: Harem Of Otherworldly Beauties

Reborn as an Evolving Space Monster: Harem Of Otherworldly Beauties

Fantasy · Luna_J006

BJB_san
BJB_san
1 months ago
Commented

This would make more sense as stamina.

BJB_san
BJB_san
2 months ago
Commented

Phone?

BJB_san
BJB_san
2 months ago
Commented

I'm pretty sure that's not what he meant when he said he could use his name. But ok, let's go down this route.

Xu Yan sheathed his sword, crossed his arms over his chest, and said arrogantly, "Listen well. My name is Xie Lingfeng!"

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?

Eastern · Half a clear breeze

BJB_san
BJB_san
6 months ago
Commented

Once again, bad math. 47 plus 18 is not 55. But I'm sure anybody reading this already knows that.

After a few hours of training, Tyrion's level of cell activation had improved by a whopping 18%, now reaching 55%, while his combat powers had increased! It would have been five to ten times but due to his extraordinary constitution, his Primordial Thunder Fiendgod Body, it required even more energy to increase his cell activation level. 

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

BJB_san
BJB_san
7 months ago
Commented

Yet another typo. They just keep piling up.

BJB_san
BJB_san
7 months ago
Commented

This paragraph reminds me of a GM describing the scene to their players. As a GM, I approve of it.

As you approach the property, a grand driveway bordered by vibrant gardens leads you to the elegant facade of the villa. Its architecture was fairly modern; it emitted both luxury and tranquility with just one look. It also has tall windows that allow natural light to pass through, illuminating the interior with natural light and allowing the people inside to view the cityscapes.

I Can Contract Beauties

I Can Contract Beauties

Eastern · Neil_Ads

BJB_san
BJB_san
7 months ago
Commented

Same. At this point it's literally just filler characters.

In his previous life, he had read many novels and he was well aware of what this was.

Cultivating by picking up attributes, I accumulate my strength!

Cultivating by picking up attributes, I accumulate my strength!

Eastern · Imperial Master of the Ming Dynasty