This might be, by far, my favorite review. You pointed out most of the issues. Thank you
He dont know
'Truly a good match for my Granddaughter…' He thought inwardly, stroking his goatee.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
I'm thirsty for more
Are you never going to talk about the skills that he obtained at all? Already in Chapter 30, but there has never been any info dump regarding the skills
For those who aren't commenting or supporting, please do.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
And that my friends is the end of the novel! Thank you for reading.
'Is this… the end?!'
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
You are not 'Him' bro 😭
"Greetings, denizens of H'Trae! My name is Adonis, and I have been chosen as the Hero of this world by the—"
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
I've played a catcher before...catching feelings for her
Oh dear
Yatsuo adjusted his grip for a two-seam fastball and quickly shot into action, throwing his whole body forward. Yet as the ball was about to leave his hand, he felt a shockwave crawl up from his wrist.
Major League System
Sports · leeroycgna
Author you really need to fix the grammar and sentence structuring. It's confusing to read and breaks immersion
What if someone becomes a High King? Will they replace Konrad's face?
Whenever a player became a High King, their face would be engraved on the Shinecoins. It was the highest honor a player could receive.
MMORPG: Rebirth of the Mortal Online
Fantasy · Alekzi