Noire

Noire

male LV 14

If one day I die, I'll go up high in the sky. Now that I'm so far, I'll write your name in every star. So when you look up you'll see, how much you really mean to me.

2017-09-07 Bergabung Philippines
Lencana 27

Moments 2407
Noire
Noire
2 months ago
Commented

This story has been big words after another that held no meaning for a couple of arcs now. Story arcs that seem to keep getting recycled. This story seemed to be getting milked for whatever it is worth and is now going nowhere. Ever since the arc with the chronos guy, I seem to be reading a glossary instead of a story. *GASP* There's a bigger enemy out there? Like, are you for real?

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Posted

Plotholes so abundant you don't know where the plot is. Author keeps having to forced feed villains against the MC. Powerful people that somehow can recruit millions of people while MC retains only a thousand. Introduced a powerful trillionaire ally that treat him as a brother but somehow ended up as a middling side character. Overall an author that makes up stuff out of the air to fit his own narrative. An author that has no respect for his own creation. For people to give this a 5 star is a statement to the current level of the worlds literature.

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Commented

Now the story makes less sense. So someone powerful can recruit 10 million grunts but the great and merciless ethan can't. Does that mean he's just a poor bloke? What a poor dumb MC, can't even have a sub guild that has millions of people. So that the story doesn't have to force itself keeping the MC group always outnumbered, hence the author bullishly making his way through to "balance" things out.

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Commented

He went through travelling not thinking on how to save the princess instead thought of it on the spot? This is the inconsistencies in writing that kills many stories. The MC suddenly not thinking ahead of a plan hence being discovered by the AI. While the author is drumming his fingers thinking of his well made "plot". When in actuality he just forced his MC to act out of character to make the "plot" possible.

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Commented

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Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Replied to Ballad

The MC is, even with all these lame excuses people put out. It doesn't change the fact that the MC is a bit stupid. You made a game where only marvel characters are referenced, and the MC think it is not marvel?

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Replied to Good_stuff

Doesn't work with such lame excuse. A game you made in a world where only marvel is referenced? That's just plain stupid.

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Replied to Mlnt

Based on the replies on this, they're the same as the MC. A bit oblivious. Your excuses doesn't work. If it's another parallel world then everything would be the same. Why is the marvel franchise only the reference here? There's a lot more popular franchises aside from marvel. So having a world that only referenced marvel is a clue in itself.

Noire
Noire
7 months ago
Replied to Oswald_5

ahahaha yeah. Was wondering what happened for the last 200 chapters. Did the author suddenly reach puberty?

Noire
Noire
10 months ago
Commented

With such computing powers, he wouldn't lose to any hand to hand fight at all. He can react precisely as he wants. "Fighting" experience is only the development of instinctual actions, you keep practicing so you lessen the reaction time needed. With practice you don't have to think how to react when you see a punch coming. With his gargantuan analyzing ability he'd be invincible. Also telepaths will be no problem, with how fast he's thinking the minds of the telepaths would have turned into mush as soon as they tried entering his mind.