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Now I'm intrigued!!! Hope you can keep your promises! 👏👏

Hello @lumydee. Firstky, thanks for your novel, I really like it. Secondly, I think you should stop writing this fillers or at least not so long, just one chapter is enough. Really nearly half the chapter was describing each panel of HxH manga. Really??!! IMHO that's not right, Just say the like it, and they want more. That's all, that's the message you want to transmit in this chapter. Third, again, 4 - 6 chapters for nonsense filler is too much, for me it's just a desperate cry of you, the author, that you are fed up writing and want to stop, at least is my humble opinion. Fourth, fillers are good to show how has evolved Baymard during arch's or just to move the timeline, that's ok, again 1 or 2 chapters, not 6 of nonsense, because this las chapters are nonsense in the sense that it does not give anything to the plot, just pure annoye sense. P.D. Quick question, in those new mangas in Baymard, it did not show the authors name (Landon Barn) ? I mean, if it does, little Momo should be pestering Landon to tell him more. And second, If they are royalty, they should have personal drivers to take them, or others members not just Landon. I mean one time pestering Landon it's funny, two times less funny, third time I would kick them out of the palace, really they are annoying. That's my two cents, hope you gain something of it. Cheers

I just want to add my to cents. Flat houses, really? You should have study more WHY flat houses are made (and it is not because modern standards). It is because of the weather, in sunny places all year long (like California) flat houses are ok, because the will not have troubles with snow. If a flat house is use in a place with seasonal snow or all year long, the house will collapse eventually by the weight of the snow on the roof. The snow will keep go on an on, every time the roof will increase its weight and eventually it will collapsed. Pure physics. You should have use a typical triangle roof, that will keep the snow out of the roof, and for that you don't need to use tiles, just wood coated with some chemicals to water proof the roof.