jerryeleko

jerryeleko

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Just an avid novel reader...just the good ones of course.

2017-04-15 Bergabung Canada
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jerryeleko
jerryeleko
2 months ago
Commented

Why the flowery language? why not use your own voice and correct grammar mistakes with chatgpt or grammarly? there are a lot of things being said that could have been summarized with fewer words. I started reading this because although the first few chapters were simplistic in writing style, I still felt the author's intent in the writing. Now, it just feels like I'm reading something written by an AI.

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
2 months ago
Replied to jerryeleko

Also thanks for another great chapter!

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
2 months ago
Commented

What happened to Jean? She's feeling very underutilized now. What about Magneto and his place in the pantheon? You were doing so many interesting things before that I wish you weren't in a rush to explore new things yet.

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
3 months ago
Replied to Devils_and_angels

one of paragon angels

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
3 months ago
Commented

Happy Birthday!!!

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jerryeleko
jerryeleko
3 months ago
Posted

It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
10 months ago
Commented

battle iq: AOT's Armin vs bertoltd's collusus battle.battle instincts:AOT's Ackerman's bloodline.

Machia isn't any genius, he doesn't have a high Battle I.Q., but he has good battle instincts. The two are different... This means that he is not prone to outsmarting his opponent, but he can notice that he is strong and use his advantage.

Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel

Anime & Comics · EvansKannon

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
10 months ago
Commented

Are you imagining yourself being the Mc?

We had our house refurnished to make the kitchen on the upper left side of this room, "Oh, the last night's porn is still up. Want to watch it."

HE of Infinite Lives (Multi-Verse Story)

HE of Infinite Lives (Multi-Verse Story)

Anime & Comics · NetoraseTales

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
10 months ago
Commented

Sigh... another bashing fic. I get that the ministry is curropt, but taking every chance to bash them is distracting.

"I've just had the most wonderful idea, folks," I said through my scowl. "Since Crouch and Bagman want to play games with our champions, I feel like we should turn the tables on them. Let's see how they like being ogled by a crowd in freezing weather."

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Book 2]

Book&Literature · Daddy

jerryeleko
jerryeleko
10 months ago
Commented

'nearly impossible'

We entered a staring contest for a few seconds before she ultimately back downed. FYI, during one of my earlier testing of [Gamer's Body] I found out that I didn't need to blink. This made it vertical impossible for me to ever lose a staring match.

The Doll Gamer - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

The Doll Gamer - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

Book&Literature · RedWall

  • The Lottery of Fate (A MCU Fanfiction) original

    The Lottery of Fate (A MCU Fanfiction)

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    A young man from our world is mysteriously transported to the Marvel Cinematic Universe. He discovers that he has a system in his mind that grants him random powers in exchange for his lifespan. He decides to use this system to survive and explore this new world, but he also has a hidden goal: to reach the same level of existence as the One Above All, the supreme being of the Marvel Multiverse. However, he does not know why he was chosen by this system or what it really wants from him. He also does not know how his powers will affect his sanity and personality. Along the way, he will encounter many heroes and villains, friends and enemies, dangers and opportunities, and maybe even love. Will he succeed in his quest or will he lose everything in the process? Will he remain sane or will he succumb to madness? Find out in this fanfiction of adventure, action, romance and humor.

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