Althalus

Althalus

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2017-09-20 Bergabung United States
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Althalus
Althalus
1 years ago
Posted

I enjoyed the plot and the characters, however, the grammar needs to be reviewed especially the pronouns as they swap between him and her for the same character frequently.

Althalus
Althalus
1 years ago
Posted

The first forty chapters were somewhat entertaining, however, I do question how long this type of story can continue to be interesting. There were several grammar mistakes and the flow was choppy in several places. I wouldn't mind reading a little more past the first forty chapters to see how it will proceed.

Althalus
Althalus
1 years ago
Posted

I enjoyed the book, it is not as good as the Library yet but the 40 chapters were good.

Althalus
Althalus
1 years ago
Posted

One of the best books I have read. this is my second time through it.

Althalus
Althalus
3 years ago
Commented

Wrong name.

Meanwhile, Duan Tianhe had returned to Mount Helan.

Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm

Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm

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Althalus
Althalus
4 years ago
Commented

Shouldn't he just use an on the spot quiz in his always the wrong answer pencil to find the correct item. He could even play 20 questions before leaving his house to determine where to go and what to get.