Possibly? idk what you had in mind, googled around for a bit
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Aye, this is the explanation I was talking about. While not in the story itself, you at least explain to my fellow readers what's behind your decision in regards to using the gear. Good on you. Been doing some pondering on my own to see if I could find a way I would personally have done something like this, and the 'easy' way out would be a thought before accepting the longinus that would go something like this: "Hmm, while undoubtedly I'll decrease my power accumulation by a bit doing this, I still have Gluttony to do some heavy lifting, not to mention now that I've contact with the devils, true longinus should make them reconsider standing against me" Well, use it however you see fit, if you even want to use it, just an idea that would both give a plausible reasoning for his action and reminder of gluttony that is still a power creep. Sticking around to read more, cheers for your good work so far! :)
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Had to listen to the remix of a turtle made it to the water after reading this
Turtle squad unite!
A Reincarnated Tale : Pokémon
Anime & Comics · Aht
No matter how you word it, he did limit himself and there is no proper explanation as to his actions. 1(gluttony)+1(system) is 2. Removing one of them will never get 2 in the end, therefore limiting. Did he cut off future prowess? No. Did he delay it? Absolutely, without a shadow of a doubt. In a metaphorical approach, you could say he's a car enthusiast, so he traded his car for a horse carriage. The main issue people find with this decision is that.. It's not needed, therefore, using the spear is beyond stupid, which irritates people, and this chapter didn't give a proper explanation as to WHY he used the spear. So you need to either revise the chapters to add in a reason, or quickly explain why he did what he did or you'll be bleeding readers. I hope I explained properly why most readers gave you backlash, if not I'll try to further explain it.
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Let me see if I get this straight... A 50m tall golden dragon, who also happens to be a God, can possibly shatter the world with just his will alone, was running around like a fucking headless chicken scared out of his mind, even knowing what was going on and how to avoid it, all the while knowing his wife would be unhappy with it? Geez, way to make Mr Retard himself, one blonde Uzumaki Boi, look like the pinnacle of common logic and genius. Big choke.
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A Lazy Man's Adventure (Completed)
Anime & Comics · PandaWanKenobi
No problem, I recall seeing a few ones later on but was waaay too into the groove to stop reading. Caught up and waiting for new chapter. Bloody good work you've done here!
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Dark Soul System(DxD)
Anime & Comics · BlackSwordman1234
Author, could you fix the spelling mistake on Adrian's name here? It is the first spelling mistake that I spotted that disrupted the, so far, absolutely stunning flow of the story and feel it would be a great injustice to not let you know.
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Dark Soul System(DxD)
Anime & Comics · BlackSwordman1234
No, I was tricked! This is the legendary dot dot dot bloodline, a passive bloodline that summons a crow in the background dragging 3 dots behind it whilst saying ahou!
I like this blank bloodline the most. Pick it.
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original Leading the Leaf
He has everything planned as he enters the world of Naruto. All is set in stone, right? What could go wrong? PLEASE READ! I do not own Naruto, or any of the characters in the series. Likewise, I do not own Shuhei Hisagi, as he is based on the character from Bleach, and I do not own Bleach either. It is 99.99% CERTAIN, that there will be no further updates to this story. You have been warned.3 Chs 15 Koleksi
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The Blacksmith in the Leaf
A blacksmith dies, and reincarnates into the Naruto universe with a boatload of useful things. ---IMPORTANT READ--- > I do NOT own Naruto, or any of the other Intellectual Property referred to in my story. > I am 99% sure there will be no more updates past the first 4 chapters. I wrote them because I had an idea and bam, here we are. If I do, good stuff, me! But still don't expect me to keep going after that.6 Chs 187 Koleksi
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Naruto FanFiction: A Drastic Change
A man from Earth dies and decides to live his life in the Elemental Nations, but instead of working himself to change a lot, he chooses a different route. Deciding that Naruto still had much untapped potential that was never realized, he decides to take it upon himself to give Naruto what he never had: A loving family and proper training. The story will mostly follow Naruto though, however the entire story will be influenced by above mentioned. *NEW* - I do NOT own Naruto or any other intellectual property used in my story. - Do not expect further updates on this. If I do update a chapter, once again, expect that to be the end. ----------------------------------------------- - The updates will be slow, VERY SLOW, if at all. I only promise that I am not going to churn out chapters. - If you see any things that you believe would be better if changed, do point it out, and I'll ponder it. I might use it if you properly explain why and it makes sense. - English is not my native language, so there will be flaws in the written language as well, which is only natural. If you find any glaring errors that lowers your reading experience, please do not hesitate to point it out. - If you wish to use the base idea for this format, or even rewrite what I have written, feel free to do so, please just refer to this novel page, if it's done you're more than welcome to change whatever, or even raw copy the entire thing and just change a few things.6 Chs 82 Koleksi
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God Pinnacle System
Simo Weste was suddenly thrown into a completely new world, after being executed in the world of mortals. Follow Simo as he takes revenge on those he have to take revenge on, love those he love, and conquer the entire world. Important notes! Absolutely do read these: - I am not sure how often I will update a chapter, as I write sporadically. - The novel will explain things as it goes along, if it is not explained in detail I valued it less than many other options. - I am by no means a genius at writing novels, and this novel will not be too long either, just covering what it should. - I can by no means guarantee that this novel will not be dropped, since I am very prone to being bored fast. So read at own risk! - This novel will feature all kinds of things, such as reincarnation, system and the classic old goat reincarnator that tries taking over the body but failing miserably and being absorbed in reverse. - The main character is extremely ruthless, however, he will say what all of us sometimes wish the main characters in other novels would say. - Main character is, and will be extremely over-powered. - I am open to suggestions regarding the storyline, as not everything is set in stone. - The classic wife dilemma, and even I have yet to commit to a choice, however, there will never be more than 2 wives even if I decide on more than 1! (one is more than enough nagging *cough* (sorry lol I couldn't help it)) - The first few chapters might seem slightly rushed or poorly written, and I might revisit them in the future to change some things in them if I feel the need to. - Picture credit to google. I originally wanted a picture of Simo Häyhä, as the main characters first name was taken from that, but was unable to find a fitting one.5 Chs 55 Koleksi
Climbing up the pole, it was a typo. He clearly meant to write "Climbing up the pope"
Chapter 3: Climbing up the pole
Douluo: My Teacher is Pope
Anime & Comics · wheretonow