So far I liked the way the story is slowly building up. The slow encroaching of the elements of the demons and how the world around them all is slowly changing. All of that is well done and well thought out. The writing is also pretty good and engaging. I'm intrigued enough to know what happens next. As a person interested in the demons and angels and all that lies in between, and not finding a good book dealing with them, this was an excellent read for what it was.
Just a thought. Maybe instead of recognizing the sigil, it might be better if when he saw the sigil, the meaning of it was made apparent in his mind. I think that would make more sense than an entire town of demonology experts.
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Demon hunters - the beginnings
Action · Fexwind
How obessessed was the dude with demonology though. Correct me if I'm wrong but aren't the symbols of enoch more for the names of the demons rather than the seven deadly sins. That's cos the seven deadly sins were made by the church and not mentioned at all in the book of Goethia
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Demon hunters - the beginnings
Action · Fexwind
And this is where I commend the public safety of your world. Damn son! In my place the cops would take at the very least 15-20 min and that too if the phone operator understood the mess correctly.
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Demon hunters - the beginnings
Action · Fexwind
'Died' - maybe you mean Dyed
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Demon hunters - the beginnings
Action · Fexwind
I like the 'pull' word here. it's like he's in a gacha game and he's just waiting to pull that SSR waifu
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Demon hunters - the beginnings
Action · Fexwind
The point off is for some of the puntuation errors and grammar stuff. Other than that for me this was a plain old nostalgia trip, Dragon Ball and Dragon Ball Z were my childhood. So it was fun meeting those characters once more in those situations. The ideas of this novel are rather well thought out and the characters are interesting as well. Give it a read if you like DBZ. That's my recommendation
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Dragon Ball: Dimension Distortion
Anime & Comics · Nico_Leztier
Nice though
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Dragon Ball: Dimension Distortion
Anime & Comics · Nico_Leztier
That means a lot for me. I'm currently on hiatus due to real life stuff. I hope you'll still be there when I come back.