Jon Snow is the only truly unique figure in this world. Creating another character with the same level of uniqueness breaks immersion. The fanfiction might still be good, but not the best. And I’m not saying Game of Thrones: Jon Arctic is the best just because Jon Snow is the MC, but because of many other factors. Other fanfictions can work without Jon Snow, but they will just be ‘good’ novels. However, they will lack the key elements that create full immersion, making them feel less deeply connected to the world. If a fanfiction aims to be the best, then making Jon Snow the main character, without prior knowledge of the plot and without being a self-insert, is a mandatory requirement.
Why chapter are so short? All 9 chapter should merged into one
He mean, each time you finished these last chapter you say it’s the final trial, when it’s not the final trial 😿
I like this fan fiction but the way of it’s has been write is a bit weird ngl
Because it’s realistic, hapenned something similar to me in real life, the person was asking so many and wanted to be right so bad I had to explain things clearly to make her understand my point, you not gonna ignored a friend or someone just because he talk too much or ask to much question, that’s hella mean and have a big lack of empathy
Hat really amazing bro, like really amazing to do something like this, you’re a genius by any chance
I don’t understand the synopsis, what mean he learn with the great master of Witcher world ? He became a Witcher before come in Westeros ?
No, the best is Game of thrones - John Artic
Bro wtf is this stop from nowhere ???? Where the update ? Where the notice if stopped ????
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The trials aren’t explored in depth, and everything moves too fast. The chapters are extremely short, lacking detail, and end way too quickly. At times, certain things are unnecessarily repeated, and those little event titles before each scene give the story a choppy feel. Sometimes, it even feels like an AI-generated novel, as if the text was just summarized rather than fully developed. The nine chapters you’ve translated could have been fleshed out more, making the story far more immersive. ⸻ Steve Jobs himself is a major issue. Despite all the hardships he faces, he doesn’t change. He never questions himself, and he remains stuck in a rigid and sterile morality that makes no sense in the Game of Thrones universe. In his original world, it was borderline acceptable (though still excessive), but in Westeros, it’s completely unrealistic. There, moral flexibility is essential—characters are meant to be gray, not frozen in an idealistic mindset that has zero connection to the world he’s in. Normally, these trials should have shaped him, turning him into someone more adapted to this brutal world, a true hero. But in the end, it feels like he hasn’t learned anything except how to fight. He’s still the same soldier, with an unrealistically good personality. All these challenges have no real impact on him. He doesn’t change, he doesn’t mature, and it lacks realism and depth. ⸻ Another big issue: missed potential in his arrival. I expected him to arrive in Game of Thrones as a baby, with us following his accelerated yet logical growth. But that’s not the case, and it hurts immersion. The core idea is brilliant, but the execution falls short. Honestly, if you ever write a similar novel with the same concept but using Jon Snow as the protagonist, it would make far more sense. Jon already has the perfect personality to evolve into a true hero of Westeros. I don’t know if you’ve read Game of Thrones – Jon Arctic, but it’s a fantastic example of how to do a Game of Thrones fanfiction right
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