StupidNovel

male LV 5

Reading all kind of novel including josei and shoujo Excluding shounen ai, yaoi, and yuri.

2017-07-27 Bergabung Indonesia
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StupidNovel
StupidNovel
2 years ago
Posted

Fan Fic from novel Lord of the People: Discount Artifact For Signing In at the Start I used this novel to practice my writing skill Bakalan ada beberapa perubahan disana-sini, Aku juga akan membuat beberapa original chapter yang memuat perspective atau reaksi warga sipil. Aku juga disini akan lebih mengeksplore personality karakter, terutama karakter-karakter penting dan juga Lord dari other territory Expect some mistakes and loopholes, because it's based on the original novel.

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Replied to Goham

Thank god you answer it dude. The thought of MC become gay keep come to my mind that I get sleep deprived for almost 10 years

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Posted

Hey, someone please tell me, is it yaoi? I found the tag NoYaoi but, you know... Just on case. .................... ..................... ....................

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Replied to NikTitanik866

You're goddamn right

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Replied to Bleistift

You know, I read it for a while, and keep skim over it because it's too cringe for me. I scroll some comment to find person with the same opinion as me.. But everyone keep talking about how good it is that it fell so fake. And boom, I found one person, I personally don't really mind with cliche story, but the way it flow is so wierd. Might be because it's an original story and the author is new.

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Commented

The dialogue is too cringe. you need to try fix the dialogue a little bit. every thing that MC do doesn't have to said out loud. Other than the dialogue, it's all okay.

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
3 years ago
Commented

good luck with you all, I am out. No argument at all, it's just, this novel is not for me

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
4 years ago
Commented

Personally, I like this way. He's not OP yet, but have tendencies to be OP. Not a harem seeking yet, but have tendencies to do so. IMO, maybe the pace need to be quicken. There's some useless thing to say, something like CEO who keep busying himself with his paper. This kind of thing isn't won't change your story at all. So it best you can do some editing maybe? Ah I know it needs money or even time to do so. But it will make the story more enjoyable to read. Last thing, you're doing great. IDK how many original novel out there that I drop because the story isn't relatable or the plot is so forced that it makes you cringe. At least for now, I like how it progress, slice of life novel with harem romance in the future in modern world, with not so OP (yet) MC that doesn't depend too much on system.

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
4 years ago
Replied to AozoraHikaru

The supposedly brother is real brother or not? by blood I mean. I kinda hate harem or reverse harem, so it will be amazing if there's only one ML

StupidNovel
StupidNovel
4 years ago
Commented

IDK bout U, but just with this one chapter, I already hate MC

  • Lord of the Realm : My Sign-In Reward Seems Overpowered! original

    Lord of the Realm : My Sign-In Reward Seems Overpowered!

    Book&Literature

    People all over the world transported into Atrux, became a leader of people, striving for better off, struggling against all ethnic groups. Traxex is the lord of human races, sign in on Traxex everyday to get everything from a mere wood to a powerful ancient beast or even demonlord. Cliff Marsel sign in the first day got a discounted product! "Legendary Artifact Desolator only 10.000 crystal? Bought it." "50% off, mythical dragon pet? 1.000 please." "99% templar knight training camp! Let's take over the continent first!"

    7 Chs 27 Koleksi

  • Galactic Garbage Station Fanfic original

    Galactic Garbage Station Fanfic

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE

    Author amatir mencoba bikin fanfic gegara novel aslinya gak sesuai ma selera penulis. Yang bakal penulis copy disini cuman beberapa nama character sama ide dari original authornya saja. Sisanya kemungkinan akan berbeda dari aslinya.

    2 Chs 1 Koleksi

  • Unguilty Crown original

    Unguilty Crown

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION HAREM

    Shu slowly closing his eyes. Remembering all those days where he fights alongside his friend to overcome his weakness. Along with his journey, he found betray, bonds, and love. He can't remember how many times he wants to redo it to fill the void inside his heart. Now he is here, in his dying breath, lying in his bed alone without anyone he loves. I am praying to you, my Lord, please give me a chance to redo it!!! "I'll gladly accept it" With that voice that resonating in his head. His soul comes out, flying around and immediately disappear, going through time before everything is done.

    11 Chs 274 Koleksi

  • C World original

    C World

    Fantasy

    Apa itu kenyataan? apakah hal yang kita lihat sekarang adalah kenyataan? Atau sebenarnya kenyataan itu lebih dari itu? Dunia dipenuhi Crawler? Dunia aman tentram? Manakah yang nyata? Ataukah semua itu adalah kepalsuan dan kenyataan itu adalah hal yang berbeda dari yang aku duga?

    1 Chs 0 Koleksi