anggi

no epic battle at all??

ITS just boring..already chapter 20+ but..boring..u fokus to much on story build..it makes feel like politic kingdom build..don't forget this is fanfic..many already know about the original plot..

to many unnececary chapter..u wasted them..

to much thinking and nonsense..already this far yet still make the story like prologue of some kind politic novel

boring..97% original story..tq but need to drop..hope u get a lot of stone

??what different from the real story??

plis fix the naming..u make people confuse with it

such a super short story..and u want Stones??dream on

after all the memories Naruto still an idiot..boring