Can you share the original name of the book if you're translating them and want to drop them? Both the story and translation are good, but it's still too soon to gather more reader since fanfiction translation usually gather more chapter after at least 50 or even 100 chapters
It's cool how you develop the story, it's filled with character development with Ricky as the main vocal. Keep up with the good works author, thanks!
Tftc author! Now, let's talk about the usage of the system, one of the main point of this story is the system, but the MC didn't fully uses it. why? I don't really understand but, i assume it's because not every women will get a mission for it, right? Cmiiw, but if that's true, then you need to write them repeatedly in a different way. You might use some monologue like "oh, a target... Haven't seen it in a while" or narration that explains it. For power up, you don't need to fully write the smut in details. Although it's cool and i like them. It'd be hard to continue since the story will ve repetitive and you'd be bored of writing them and feel tedious. Interact with important character only, and just skip it for some C,D,E grade people. Anyhow, the story is great. Keep up the good work! Thank you for your diligence and have a nice day
you can put them at the end of the chapter, or just abbreviate them without adding explanations unnecessarily. make a line when you want to put an info dump, like start it with a ____ item a, b, c ,d ____ then end it with another to make it easier for reader to skip them
Thanks for the great chapters as always author... Info dump isn't a trouble at all, but you can also make an information table at the bottom for additional text. Showing then at the middle of the story can jeopardize immersion. Anyhow, it's a great chapter
well, people had different level of cruelty they can bear, i guess...
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nah, the one that had phd is his other incarnation. this claude is still a kid, lol.fyi, he forgot to use that because he usually always maintain his mana so he can use that to heal himself rather than wasting it for other things
His body can move again in the second week, and his stomach wants to eat meat. Magically, the troll's flesh isn't spoiled, so he let a condiment out and cooked the meat after washing it using water magic.
Mushoku Tensei: The forgotten Mob
Anime & Comics · FortuneEternal
yeah, he's dumb rotfl
His body can move again in the second week, and his stomach wants to eat meat. Magically, the troll's flesh isn't spoiled, so he let a condiment out and cooked the meat after washing it using water magic.
Mushoku Tensei: The forgotten Mob
Anime & Comics · FortuneEternal
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Patch Note [05/12/2022]: Rudeus part has been compiled together, and more part about MC and his groups' story. Life is filled with the unexpected. Today is another normal day in life, as I passed the time with my friends to bully the cursed superd child feared in the village to show our might to her. A water ball suddenly hit us. The kid from the knight's office was unleashing his spell to attack us, the bully. Never would I expect that simple water ball to create a trigger for memories to fill my brain. I was 5 at that time, and the memories were jumbled. I don't know whether it’s mine or another's. I just know that this is not a memory of a single person. And, from that memory, I know that I’m actually a mob... I’m one of Sylphiette’s bullies. You won’t know me since I am not named in any of the works, whether they were manga, novels, or even anime. Heck, I only say one word and I'm dead in the next part. an actual mob, where I don’t even appear in either the opening or the ending of the anime. The thing happened so suddenly. I don’t know whether I am reincarnated, transmigrated, or just receiving some memories from someone in the real world. The deadline is 5 years from now, the day the Metastasis incident happened. Can I be another prodigy in the Mushoku Tensei world, or will I still be another slightly better mob? Disclaimer! *I’m not a native, so please do tell me if you find any grammar mistakes or better word choices. *!!! There'd be a lot of web novel parts and less Claude's POV, but it'll get focused over time, so be patient and skim if you don't like some parts. I made it So other reader Can Understand where they are in the Story. It's also my timeline note! *Thank you very much for reading and your feedback. *R-18 tags for gore and profanity.161 Chs 5.6k Koleksi
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This Option Is also Possible?!
Lengkap
Choices had to make, it's what the earthling need to pick to continue their path. Out of the three difficulties they had to make in that room, only 1 is the right one. while the other 2? it's like a joke created to the weak and courageous one. having lived his life off, from the correct path might not be something helpful to Lucas, though. After his death, he once again needs to choose the option. But, what's the right choice out of the 3? "Can I pick all three of them? " **** Thanks for reading my story here, and please share your thought! Every critic is helpful, but please don't be too harsh on me. I'm learning English since it's not my mother tongues, using Grammarly but human and program is the same, they'd filled with mistakes and fault, that's why if you found any error don't shy to tell me. @Picture from halcyon 450 DeviantArt with slight tweaking from me!8 Chs 25 Koleksi
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Stranded World -Naruto crossover fanfiction-
Hotaru was a kid orphaned from the attack of bandits, which leads his village decimated with only him survives. the world still revolves though, saved by the ninjas from Konoha, his life started once again in that orphanage. cursing life, he wanders around lifelessly, giving up his will to stay alive and moping around while travelling within Konoha. there he met a kid smaller than him, scorned, bullied, even given scorn filled eyes towards him. he knows that the kid is hurt, but even so... he's still smiling and look at them in eyes. Seeing the struggle of Naruto, he silently clench his chest, feeling the pain which had no wound, and cries out loud while remembering his grandfather's words 'There's always a reason for something to happen' From then on, he started to look up, and get a better life. Being adopted, meeting his friends and teachers, also... an ability only he had... Never did he know that what lies in his future is a grim and dark... tragedy... Read it faster at Fortuneeternal.com35 Chs 393 Koleksi
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Diary Of the Great Lord ME! with some time traveling!
this great lord named Ji Ji, who's me? I... am your father! Luke Skywalker then said 'Nooooo' While the Chinese said 'Your sister!' Damn, who cares who I am! I am supreme! not soappreme, it's supreme! hey, don't call me a soup! while I do like soup, you better stay silent, else this great me will massage you! no, damn it! your sister! why are you guys lining up before me! Do you think my massage is cheap?! what?! you just need to call me soup just to get my massage?! who say that! damn it! I'll kill you all! wait, wait, Master! why are you here! you want to get my massage? of course, come in! ... someday after my reincarnation, I found something that allows me to travel through time... I wonder what shall I use? even the massage technique that I used on the master, learned from the future!3 Chs 0 Koleksi
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Only Me
The world pulled towards the war, in the realm above, much higher beings and devils that can easily destroy earth try to taking advantage of them. being ruled by the even higher being, the earth has an umbrella that protecting them from being enslaved. with 20 years they'd learned how scary the war would be, and another 20 years, they've lived as a reincarnated person... after coming back, they see hell... the hell that's been created by the even higher being... threatened by obliteration what will the humans' race do? while in another part, irregularity after another shown on earth, even make the higher being sweat... *I'm not a native English speaker, so please tell me when you found some error~ thanks!35 Chs 77 Koleksi
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Stranded : Chakra path
What do you do if you stranded in an unknown place, unknown world, and unknown thing? Of course! try to cultivate!! Nah, of course not... You won't do that of course, not like you are an idiot that likes to be died and relax when you know the world you're in is a massive wreck, a place where nothing is fixed... Such is what'll happen in the story, as the Main Characters live their life in a place like anime world, with and thru their own pace, and their own place... met with each other and compete with each other at their own pace... sadly, there's no 'at their own pace' in this world, as the story will develop more and more into the unexpected. and then... *Note, this is fanfiction from now on~~ lol29 Chs 164 Koleksi
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When the world suddenly...
When I live my life like always, blandly without any new thing... the same happy occurence as always... they suddenly...2 Chs 21 Koleksi
Tftc!
Naruto: The Prince of Lust
Anime & Comics · William777